original | chain of command
Original | WIP | 7800 words | BAT-ELLA verse | beta'd by electricpower and nekopyo.
Written for and dedicated to lukadron, to whom I promised a snippet story about Yue Guy and Remy, and who drew the gorgeous banner. Nobody knows this canon except us, but by all means, feel free to explore. :D Thanks to electricpower for minding my French and nekopyo for bugging me about chronology, and the both ( Read more... )
Written for and dedicated to lukadron, to whom I promised a snippet story about Yue Guy and Remy, and who drew the gorgeous banner. Nobody knows this canon except us, but by all means, feel free to explore. :D Thanks to electricpower for minding my French and nekopyo for bugging me about chronology, and the both ( Read more... )
ITS OVER
I enjoyed it so, I wanted it to go on FOREVER.
Srsly, Riley made me laugh so much
DONNA! Omg Donna
And Toni, how he was AWESOME and Guy should have seen it. YEAH, sure!!!
Fuck, no really. This was...totally what I needed today. It entertained me highly, first class story. The build up to the actual short sex was so delicious, everything fit like a well crafted puzzle. Wonderfully timed and to the point. I was not once unhappy or bored or did NOT AGREE ON STUFF.
It was...just...it. Perfect.
Eyebrows were vanishing in my hairline, the further I read. Oh, oh Remy you evil bastard. You scheming, plotting genius. And Yue, POOR HIM. But how he persevered. ;A; there were SO MANY great details in there, that really pulled me in. Like Yue tapping his fingers on his inner thigh, his constant suspicion.
Remy with the gasmask (YES)
How he called him blue-face.
The perfectly centered hand on Yue's back.
AND THE SILENCE + TIME TRACKING. KDhasdjhs what?!? How do you do all this stuff? Delicious read.
WILL COME BACK AGAIN FOR MOAR RE-READING. Ohoho. Srsly, the ending? UNF
I love all these guys so much, I grew even more found of them in this story, after you gave them their own voice (lol, Dee with her constant worry, always so wonderfully exaggerating)
And Yue's shoes, yes. How he would have to get used to seeing them actually touching the ground.
I think Guy learned a lot how to survive stuff like this back on his glorious home planet *_* in a way, it was a bit angsty (when thinking around four corners, or so), just enough to really get into your brain and get you thinking.
Of course, the intense moments like this one
It was worth it, though, to catch a glimpse of the look on Guy’s face, even though he hoped never to see it aimed at himself again in his life.
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*mouth hangs open* *speechless*
Or this one detail with Yue's hair casting needle thin shadows over his face. C:
And of course Remy would find his constant distrust and pessimistic view attractive. Oh! Oh! And the moment where Remy entered and Guy lay on his cot and his eyes flickered to the open collar?
SRSLY, HE TOTALLY WANTS HIM.
I also loved you for making the kiss not very spectacular in itself, cuz kissing isn't like a firework. Especially not in such a situation, but man, if Remy didn't enjoy that.
I could totally picture Yue's face, concentration showing in the deep line between his eyebrows as he got literally fucked into the matress. YOU ARE A MASTER OF WORDS.
...I also think I am running out of space here.
MORE REVIEW LATER.
ILU~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ BAT ELLA 4 EVA
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