The Sentinel Big Bang slash fic New Beginnings part2

[annieb1955]

Comments

[nypagan]

Very nice story. Not too cutesy with the kid, sweet and loving with J&B. Thanks for sharing.

[annieb1955]

Thanks so much!

[stargatesg1971]

Annie, this was beautifully written. I really enjoyed reading it. And I love how you smoothly incorporated pivitol parts from the actual series into it too. Your characters were spot on and endearing too...well apart from Carolyn of course *g*. Thanks for sharing!!

The artwork is awesome too, the title piece is simple and effective, while the second piece is full of love and a sense of family. Great job!

[annieb1955]

Thanks so much, Beth. i'm so glad you liked it. I loved Kiki's art so much.

[laurie_ky]

I enjoyed the story, liked seeing Jim as a dad, and he was so competent but still had the occasional parental jitters, like thinking he needed to impress Carolyn by having Joe wear a tie

[annieb1955]

Thanks, Laurie, for the wonderful comments. You've given some great ideas to work with as I really want to go back and fill out this story more and fill in a few things I think I overlooked. I really appreciate the time you took to read it and review.

[oescahro]

I enjoyed this Annie, I could see Jim being just like this as a father.

[annieb1955]

Thank you so much!

[tovemag1961]

Hon,
love a happy ending between Jim and Blair!
Have not seen the movie the story is based on, but I don't think I need too... This is verrrrry lovely! <3
hugz
Tove