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Week One: Birds of a Feather

Feb 07, 2010 10:31

Call of the WildTonight the Wolf Moon will rise above the plains. The pull on my litter mates and me will be undeniable. It will also be deeply spiritual. This year will change everything. As a new adult, tonight I will be allowed to choose between a life with my pack or a life in the human world. A world that I want to join so badly I can taste ( Read more... )

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vyvyan_wilde February 8 2010, 23:12:49 UTC

I'm not a big fan of merewolf stories, but I enjoyed reading this. I found it really engaging, and want to know what choice she made in the end too. Nice work :)

Just a small typo:
"Don’t be made, Wa-wa."
-Should be "mad"

annemariewrites February 9 2010, 06:29:35 UTC

Ack! Typos, they are the bane of my existence. LOL! She made the choice that makes the most sense to the reader. Unless I write chapter two next week, and then I'll be the mistress of her destiny.

sobitxx February 9 2010, 01:53:29 UTC

......... NO. ARE YOU SERIOUS?!

D: How could I be left with such a cliffhanger?! *I must find out what happens* So upset... :P

But I liked the story a lot even though werewolf fiction isn't my thing. But reading this, it seems so... interesting...

annemariewrites February 9 2010, 06:31:38 UTC

V. SRS!! LOL

If I continue with this thread for the next prompt, then you'll have the answer. If not, then the way you want the story to go is the way it went.

It's really interesting the amount of people that don't care for were fic. I'm bringing hairy back!

thewindforest February 10 2010, 07:24:17 UTC

*falls out of chair with anticipation at the end* :p

This is an excellent werewolf story! You have definitely established a believable culture and charming characters that the reader can empathize with. I really enjoyed reading this, and hope that you will continue this story :D I would love to know what happens to the twins next!

annemariewrites February 11 2010, 02:08:57 UTC

Um, they live happily ever after! Is that a good ending? Hee hee.

I foresee Niwot as going on to becoming an environmental scientist and Kiowa an exotic dancer. (Just kidding on the second one.) Depending on the prompts, there could be more. Week 2's prompt is made for something else entirely, but there's hope for 3 or 4.

Thanks for reading and commenting!!

Part One toxic_apiaceae February 12 2010, 01:04:09 UTC

Hallo there, Annemarie! I’m Toxic, one of your editors this week … or at least I HOPE this is the right article and I’m not stealing someone else’s edit. *cringes ( ... )

Part Two toxic_apiaceae February 12 2010, 01:04:31 UTC

[Trouble, it always follows my sisters, will be close on their heels ( ... )

Re: Part Two annemariewrites February 12 2010, 06:15:09 UTC

EDITOR! LOVELY EDITOR ( ... )

lacombe February 15 2010, 00:47:20 UTC

Your second editor here! :-)

I usually host my edits in web page format- it gives me much more freedom. Hope this is OK!

http://www.brigits-flame.com/edits/annemariewrites-february-07-2010.php

Glad you wrote! Love the picture you added! :-D

annemariewrites February 17 2010, 23:01:27 UTC

THANKS, EDITOR #2!!

I've got a lot of things to think about before re-writing this. The photo was actually taken about 4 years ago. Never had cause to use it until now. >:D

lacombe February 17 2010, 23:33:23 UTC

If you revisit it, please let me know! :-) I'd love to see how it evolves!