Week One: Birds of a Feather
Call of the WildTonight the Wolf Moon will rise above the plains. The pull on my litter mates and me will be undeniable. It will also be deeply spiritual. This year will change everything. As a new adult, tonight I will be allowed to choose between a life with my pack or a life in the human world. A world that I want to join so badly I can taste
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I know you're assigned these things, but thank you so much for the detailed edit. 'Tis much appreciated. Of course, some of the things pointed out are, as you say, stylistic, and I'm sort of a style adventurista. (Also, I like to make up words!) Still, I'll keep all the suggestions/corrections in mind when re-writing. Especially the ones where I missed words entirely in my hurry to write the damn thing, and then still managed to miss while editing at 4AM. ;)
RUMSPRINGA!! Wow. That's a great comparison. I love when people find things in your writing that you hadn't meant but once spoken make so much sense. Also, I'm grateful for your bluntness. It's always fun when people say they expected one thing and end up having their expectations turned on their heads in a good way. It's what I live for!
I'll keep the suspense to a minimum and say that I won't be writing more of this for Week 2. Nothing springs to mind that would fit the topic/theme. However, never say never to seeing Kiowa and Niwot again.
Thanks again for the Red Pen of D00m. LOL
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