Rapture

[angelofpearls]

Title: Rapture
Fandom: Naruto
Summary: Art is a bang.
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 105
Genre: Poetry/Romance
For: naruto100 weekly challenge - Poetry
Pairing: Deidara/Tobi

Disclaimer: STILL don't own Naruto - trying to get the paperwork through, though!

Comments

[xenylamine]

Tainted, now. No longer snow,
but vanilla - off-white.

I love this bit... and I love it more each time I read the piece.

Nice work!!! VERY nice work. ♥

[csc_lupisstone]

SQUEETHANKS! ^.^

[kidouche]

Oh wow. I'm not a huge poetry fan (especially not right now, since I'm writing a paper on Mexican poetry and I'm currently trying to avoid killing myself), but damn. This was gorgeous. *swoon* Lovely work! ♥

[csc_lupisstone]

*hands paper shredder for the Mexican Poetry* But this isn't Mexican, and you don't have to study it, thus it's alright. XD

Saaaankyuu!

[csc_lupisstone]

^^ Thaaaaank you.