Heero Yui, Perfect Idol: parte DeuxanamuanMarch 8 2011, 01:12:15 UTC
"Heero Yuy-kun?" a man asks from the doorway. He's wearing approximately half am ostrich stitched to his plaid jacket. Heero scowls at him. He backs up a step. Heero smiles. He's scary, ok. That's how the world should be. None of this glitter and 'look appealing, Heero' business.
"Ah, Heero Yuy-kun desu yo ne," the man says, nodding to himself. "I think I know," and here he falters, unsure what to say, "Your, your uncle." He settles on finally. He says it with a strange emphasis, and Heero realizes he means the scientist who acts as his handler. Heero blinks. Well, he's not exactly stealthy, but Heero can see why he'd make a good agent. Even with the sparkly turkey on, he's just so futsuu"Ah," Heero says, which translates roughly to 'Yes, I know who you are now. Please continue: the mission. Tell me all you have found about corporate finances and whether or not they're funneling money to OZ
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Re: Heero Yui, Perfect Idol: parte Deux4_03_amMarch 9 2011, 03:20:29 UTC
a;skdas your heero is perfect.
"ah"
it's one word yet it conveys so many different things. he manages to make it carry so many layers of meaning. I THINK I AM A BIT DAZZLED
also, your introduction of SO ZENZEN FUTSUU MR. AWFUL SPY nakamaru into the plot is very clever-- it's hard to tell if he's just a sempai at the agency offering the noob some friendly advice, or if he really is the agent heero thinks he is. i'm sure all will be revealed in due time~
"Ah, Heero Yuy-kun desu yo ne," the man says, nodding to himself. "I think I know," and here he falters, unsure what to say, "Your, your uncle." He settles on finally. He says it with a strange emphasis, and Heero realizes he means the scientist who acts as his handler. Heero blinks. Well, he's not exactly stealthy, but Heero can see why he'd make a good agent. Even with the sparkly turkey on, he's just so futsuu"Ah," Heero says, which translates roughly to 'Yes, I know who you are now. Please continue: the mission. Tell me all you have found about corporate finances and whether or not they're funneling money to OZ ( ... )
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"ah"
it's one word yet it conveys so many different things. he manages to make it carry so many layers of meaning. I THINK I AM A BIT DAZZLED
also, your introduction of SO ZENZEN FUTSUU MR. AWFUL SPY nakamaru into the plot is very clever-- it's hard to tell if he's just a sempai at the agency offering the noob some friendly advice, or if he really is the agent heero thinks he is. i'm sure all will be revealed in due time~
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