back with a vengeance

May 12, 2008 13:27

learned from stillesprite that it's diffusion, not osmosis. It explains my failed study plan. I was waiting for the wrong process to happen.

kitsune714: the thing with yamapi is that when he's live, and he messes up a song, he starts compensatory stripping
kitsune714: to distract you ( Read more... )

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are you still here??? D: tatoeba May 13 2008, 05:01:23 UTC
sorry to spam your page more Nikki, but since the other parts were here, figured i'd just add the ending here too. :\\

the last bit~ and omgomg my smut is sooooo wordy and stupid that this had to be cut into two parts. fail is me.
i apologize profusely in advance. :(

Yamapi maintains eye contact as the girl pulls down his pants, then slips off his shirt. She tugs at his hand, makes him join them on the bed, and when she notices their locked gazes, she smiles, shifts closer to Jin and presses her mouth to the side of his, licks at the bottom lip slowly. The noise Yamapi makes goes straight to Jin’s groin, and he can’t stop himself from grabbing Yamapi’s hand, from pulling him close.

Yamapi barely has time to whisper Jin before Jin kisses him, slow and steady, doesn’t rush, can’t rush, because this isn’t some girl he’s picked up at the club. This is Yamapi and this is so much more.

Jin’s not sure what to think, doesn’t know if he should think; Yamapi’s lips are soft and hot, sweet, something far too addicting, something Jin’s ( ... )

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FINALLY THE ACTUAL END AND I'LL GO DIE NOW tatoeba May 13 2008, 05:02:12 UTC
Yamapi moves first, a slight shift of his hips, and Jin grips at his sides, responds eagerly, sets a rhythm of lust and perfection. Jin’s never felt such heat before, feels dizzy from the overwhelming intensity of it all, pressing into Yamapi, watching through lidded eyes as Yamapi shares wet, open-mouthed kisses with the girl he almost forgot was there, too wrapped around the sensations that Yamapi was creating in him, and the sight of Yamapi slipping his fingers between her legs only pushes Jin closer towards the edge ( ... )

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Re: FINALLY THE ACTUAL END AND I'LL GO DIE NOW anamuan May 13 2008, 05:05:10 UTC
NO DYING! NO SHAME! well. shame if it's poorly written, but i don't really expect that from you. NO SHAME!

I'M GOING TO READ IT NOW.

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Re: FINALLY THE ACTUAL END AND I'LL GO DIE NOW tinyangl May 13 2008, 05:07:00 UTC
asdfkjas;lfdjas well you know nikki's still here, and i just HAPPENED to still be awake. as;dlfkjaslkdfjalskdjf um. um. i think this is awesome. shame? wtf is shame? if this is what ppl are ashamed of.... ;alskdjfkasjdf um, no. THIS WAS AWESOME. THAT ENDING WAS JUST ;LKEJA;LSDJFLKAJLKD EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE. I LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT. WOOT. GO YAMAPI FOR MAKING A MOVE. OHMYGOD. AS;DLKFJASLDFJ;.KSJ and don't get me started on the smut. (just don't. i'm barely coherent as it is.)

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Re: FINALLY THE ACTUAL END AND I'LL GO DIE NOW tatoeba May 13 2008, 06:35:46 UTC
a;lskdjflakjelskecals I'M REALLY SO GLAD YOU LIKED YOU HAVE NO IDEA. *BEAMS*
asldk shame as in shame because i haven't written smut for the longest time, plus i've never written het. D: so. yes. >.>
BUT WHATEV. I'M GLAD YOU LIKED IT. ♥♥♥♥ :D

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anamuan May 13 2008, 06:51:15 UTC
i love how het is what people graduate to writing in this fandom.

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anamuan May 13 2008, 05:40:22 UTC
if it makes you feel better, my smut is always longer than everything else i write. PLUS I LOVE SPAM. OBVIOUSLY.

presses her mouth to the side of his, licks at the bottom lip slowly
*________*

This is Yamapi and this is so much more.
awww. ;_; love~

UMMMMM. I AM NOT GOING TO QUOTE BACK ALL THE HOT BITS, BECAUSE THAT WOULD BE UM. WELL. THE WHOLE THING. J;KLFALKJFALKJF BUT YES. GOOD. JOB. SMUT GOOD. YES.

traces her manicured fingers along the defined lines of his abs and Yamapi archs into the touch
HOTTTT. ONLY A PARTIAL LIE BECAUSE I'M NOT QUOTING ALL THE HOT BITS.

when Yamapi’s lying beneath him, writhing against his hand
*whimper*

feels dizzy from the overwhelming intensity of it all
idk i just like the description.

Jin feels awake for a long time afterward, waits until Yamapi’s stopped drawing circles on the back of his hand before he’s even capable of closing his eyes.
j;lkafdlj;kfaj;lk so cute!

watches Jin from over the rimi like this a lot. it's very. easy. comfortable or something. I think of white morning light ( ... )

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tatoeba May 13 2008, 06:39:24 UTC
*FLAILS AT YOU* a;lsdkjfa;ew first off: I'M SO GLAD YOU ENJOYED IT. *insanely giddy*
and second: Why I love it when people quote, yes I do, and this made me feel all kinds of fuzzy and warm inside.
;alsalks I'm glad you thought the smut was good. It hurt my brain because I haven't written smut for ages and a;flekjalsd I've never written het before this so. :\\\\\ *was incredibly worried*
But you liked it and I'm happy. :333 Thank you for such a nice comment, Nikki. ♥♥♥♥♥♥

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anamuan May 13 2008, 06:51:53 UTC
<33333333 i love when people love comments i leave them ♥

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die another day, not this one, because. FUCK. *________* 4_03_am May 13 2008, 14:02:29 UTC
i think this whole porn-fist-thing-in-the-morning is becoming too habitual for me, ougad. but obviously i can't break this habit when people keep writing things like THIS. sd;lkf;slkdf'; i have to be out in a bit, but wtf i'm instead of showering. ;___;

shifts closer to Jin and presses her mouth to the side of his, licks at the bottom lip slowly. The noise Yamapi makes goes straight to Jin’s groin, and he can’t stop himself from grabbing Yamapi’s hand, from pulling him close.

nnngh. this image, in my head. sexy sexy sexy.

It’s not until an arm is wrapping around Jin's waist and a pair of lips are on his neck does he even begin to remember that they’re not alone.

hello, you've got my heart beating at nine thousand beats per second here.

She moves back from Jin and kisses Yamapi instead, traces her manicured fingers along the defined lines of his abs and Yamapi archs into the touch.

*______* mmmmmmm.

Jin’s...pressing into Yamapi, watching through lidded eyes as Yamapi shares wet, open-mouthed kisses with the girl*bites ( ... )

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Re: die another day, not this one, because. FUCK. *________* tatoeba May 13 2008, 17:09:58 UTC
al;sldjf;alweifsjl *DANCES EXCITEDLY* I'M SO GLAD YOU ENJOYED IT~! ♥♥♥♥ :DDDD
And a;lsdkfjs you quoted too, I love when people quote back, makes me all giddy and tingly with a big grin on my face. :DD
And YAY to making your morning! Waking up to porn is always a good thing. XDDD
I am really so glad you liked it, ne. Thank you, Rhey, for such a lovely comment. :333 ♥♥♥

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ha! like i have a life anamuan May 13 2008, 05:03:32 UTC
YES! I AM HERE!

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