Free-For-All Comment-Fic Challenge.

Jan 18, 2009 08:57

-inspired by the comm comment_fic. I found it through willow_reece, but it's mostly real person fic, which just isn't my cup of tea. I love challenges and any sort of fic-a-thon, so I just thought it would be easiest to host one myself!

-How To: Comment here with a prompt (fandom/pairing in the subject line). Or a few prompts, actually. However many you can dream ( Read more... )

brilliant, firefly, challenge, all fandoms, rayne, presents

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Firefly/Rayne an_ardent_rain January 18 2009, 15:29:28 UTC
Sticky

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Re: Firefly/Rayne willow_reece January 21 2009, 00:16:23 UTC
River payed no attention to Jayne as she sat perched in the back of the mule next to him, eating the cotton candy Captain had bought for her as a reward for making sure he hadn't gotten shot on their last job. He and Zoe were inside the general store loading up on food supplies while she and Jayne, who had already gotten their ammo supply stored, sat waiting.

Jayne whimpered a little as he sat watching her while she licked another piece of the sweet, sugary confection into her mouth, the artificial coloring leaving her tongue blue.

"Hey, uh-girl?"

"Hm?" She purred as she enjoyed the taste of sugar on her tongue.

"Ya gonna eat all of that?"

"Yup." She replied, adding a pop to the 'p'.

"Aw come on, that things bigger than yer head."

She turned to gaze at him, her eyes locking with his, which were hidden behind his shades, as her tongue poked out and stole another lick of her sweet treat. He seemed to follow the movement hungrily and she gave him a devious smile.

"Trade?" She asked.

"What kind of trade?" He asked suspiciously ( ... )

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Re: Firefly/Rayne an_ardent_rain January 21 2009, 00:55:51 UTC
Oh, I liked this! Hee. It was really cute. Sneaky!River is very sneaky. :)

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Re: Firefly/Rayne willow_reece January 21 2009, 01:21:57 UTC
Hee. Thankies. ♥

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gilove2dance January 18 2009, 15:37:03 UTC
Firefly/Rayne

You're the only one who
Drags me kicking and screaming through fast dreams
You're the only one who
Knows exactly what I mean

I hope you can forgive me for that time
When I put my hand between your legs
And said it was small
Cuz its really not at all
I guess there's just a part of me that likes to bring you down
Just to keep you around
Cuz the day that you realize how amazing you are
You're gonna leave me

These are lyrics from the song You Are the Only One by Maria Mena

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an_ardent_rain January 18 2009, 15:53:36 UTC
"What?" Jayne stared at her warily as River smiled broadly, pulling absently on a strand of her hair. "Why're you starin' at me like that?" He looked down, feeling paranoid under her wide, vacant eyes. Other than being completely devoid of clothing, nothing seemed odd.

"The girl likes to stare. Man-called-Jayne has plenty worth staring at."

Jayne grunted. "Though you said y'ain't s'posed to end yer sentences with 'at'."

"You ain't," River stressed, crawling towards him. She settled herself between his legs, drawing thick, sinewy arms around her frail, peachy-pale body. "But grammatical errors can be excused when there is naked Jayne to enjoy ( ... )

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gilove2dance January 18 2009, 16:02:09 UTC
Awesome!!! Very hot! Yay, this made me very happy!

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an_ardent_rain January 18 2009, 16:10:33 UTC
Hee. ^^ Well, I'm very glad.

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firefly/rayne depthxofxdreams January 18 2009, 15:42:58 UTC
video games

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Re: firefly/rayne an_ardent_rain January 18 2009, 16:03:22 UTC
Jayne gulped nervously as River moved towards him like some stealthy jungle cat.

'Knew I shouldn't 'a' trusted her,' he thought. I should 'a' seen some o' her moonbrained go se comin' a mile away.'

"Why the apprehension?" River asked sweetly, peeling off the mid-thigh length khaki shorts she'd been wearing. "Thought you wanted to learn."

"This don't seem like no sort o' video game to me."

"Man-called-Jayne is merely ignorant." She straddled his thighs, wearing an expression he'd only seen on the best, most expensive whores. "Have start button." She nipped his nose. "B and A." He yelped a little as she pinched his nipples. Her hands traveled slowly down his body, and she leaned down, inch after delicious inch of her body coming into tight contact with his. "And look." She wrapped one hand around his cock, keeping her eyes locked with his. "Even comes with joystick."

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Re: firefly/rayne depthxofxdreams January 18 2009, 16:07:39 UTC
OMG that was great!! I love it!!!

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Re: firefly/rayne an_ardent_rain January 18 2009, 16:11:42 UTC
*giggles* Hee. I'm glad! I must have a filthy mind today, because I saw "video games" and this was the very first thing that popped in my head.

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an_ardent_rain January 19 2009, 02:32:30 UTC
*turns away, bright red* I can hardly believe I wrote this!

"Knives," River said, "are very sharp."

Jayne nodded quickly. "Yeah, uh-huh, sharp. That's right."

"Very important." She unsheathed the biggest of Jayne's knives and ran her finger along the dull edge of the blade. "Man-called-Jayne must remember this."

"I-I will," he said, swallowing as River started walking towards him. "Knives. Sharp. Got it."

"Little girls should not play with knives. That is very dangerousJayne groaned, straining against the ropes that held him to the chair. "Then maybe it's time to stop playin ( ... )

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an_ardent_rain January 19 2009, 02:59:26 UTC
Whoo, I'm glad! I was afraid I'd stayed too "in the middle" - made it a little twisted, but maybe not quite twisted enough. Heh. I probably could have made it a leeetle better if I'd tweaked it, but I'm really, really glad you liked it as is. *laughs* ^_^

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Chuck - Casey/Chuck/Sarah an_ardent_rain January 18 2009, 16:07:08 UTC
Trapped

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