Free-For-All Comment-Fic Challenge.

Jan 18, 2009 08:57

-inspired by the comm comment_fic. I found it through willow_reece, but it's mostly real person fic, which just isn't my cup of tea. I love challenges and any sort of fic-a-thon, so I just thought it would be easiest to host one myself!

-How To: Comment here with a prompt (fandom/pairing in the subject line). Or a few prompts, actually. However many you can dream ( Read more... )

brilliant, firefly, challenge, all fandoms, rayne, presents

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Re: Firefly/Rayne willow_reece January 21 2009, 00:16:23 UTC
River payed no attention to Jayne as she sat perched in the back of the mule next to him, eating the cotton candy Captain had bought for her as a reward for making sure he hadn't gotten shot on their last job. He and Zoe were inside the general store loading up on food supplies while she and Jayne, who had already gotten their ammo supply stored, sat waiting.

Jayne whimpered a little as he sat watching her while she licked another piece of the sweet, sugary confection into her mouth, the artificial coloring leaving her tongue blue.

"Hey, uh-girl?"

"Hm?" She purred as she enjoyed the taste of sugar on her tongue.

"Ya gonna eat all of that?"

"Yup." She replied, adding a pop to the 'p'.

"Aw come on, that things bigger than yer head."

She turned to gaze at him, her eyes locking with his, which were hidden behind his shades, as her tongue poked out and stole another lick of her sweet treat. He seemed to follow the movement hungrily and she gave him a devious smile.

"Trade?" She asked.

"What kind of trade?" He asked suspiciously, arching one eyebrow high enough it peeked over his sunglasses.

She grinned and pulled a piece of the sticky treat free. She crawled towards him, the small piece of blue fluff held out in-front of her as Jayne watched her warily.

She stopped just short of touching him and held the proffered 'trade' up to his mouth.

He pushed his sunglasses up to the top of his head and eyed her tiny hand with the treat held in it. "What do I gotta give you in return?"

She smiled again before answering. "Terms to be agreed upon after."

He frowned and his eyes flicked between the innocent expression on her face and the sticky treat held in her hand, he seemed to weigh his choice, and then with a final shrug he opened his mouth and accepted the treat.

River smiled as he took the treat before sucking her fingers into his mouth greedily, his tongue sweeping over the thumb and then the index as he searched out every last drop of sugar. His throat worked while she watched, swallowing the bits as his right hand came up to grasp her wrist, holding it in place.

She shivered, but not from cold and his eyes flicked back to her face. Slowly he pulled back, releasing her index finger with an audible pop.

"That what I was tradin'?" He asked.

She shook her head slightly and leaned forward, pressing her lips to his in a sticky, but chaste kiss. It lasted only a few seconds, but River would never forget her her first kiss with Jayne.

When she pulled back she smiled at him shyly. "That is what you were trading."

He stared at her with a mixed expression on his face before settling on awe as he replied;

"Good trade."

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Re: Firefly/Rayne an_ardent_rain January 21 2009, 00:55:51 UTC
Oh, I liked this! Hee. It was really cute. Sneaky!River is very sneaky. :)

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Re: Firefly/Rayne willow_reece January 21 2009, 01:21:57 UTC
Hee. Thankies. ♥

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