Due to Sanju's overwhelmingly kind response, here is my first crappy fanfic.

[aminahlovespatd]

I wasn't originally planning on posting this but due to chanjuu 's kind response, I've decided to post it up. Please note that this is the first time I've ever written a fanfic so it isn't as good as everyone else's.
I can't promise a sequel cos I have no idea where I am going with this.
This is only a draft and this is also temporary and will be deleted

Comments

[chanjuu]

You posted it up! ♥ I'm glad =]
It was really good as you already know :D
NOW YOU MUST WRITE SECOND CHAPTER ASAP.

[aminahlovespatd]

OF COURSE I POSTED IT :)
It's your fault cos you just HAD to like to so much :)

I WANT TO WRITE A SECOND CHAP.
But I have no idea where the story is going. I was originally planning on changing Yamada's past into something else rather than a domestic problem but since you're curious about the scar thing then I have to carry on with this storyline.
:D

[chanjuu]

I was soo happy.
hahahah. its your fault for writing such a kickass, cliff hanging first chapter ;)

you have to now lol i wont stop bugging you otherwise
whatever you chose as yamada's scar problem, i know it will surprise me to no end :D

[aminahlovespatd]

THANK YOU :D
But I don't believe that it was a kick ass cliff-hanger. It was alright but it wasn't THAT good. I mean, you're one is still way better compared to this piece of crap. THAT WAS TOO NEGATIVE. Fine. It's okay for a first effort. Yes. Agreed.

LOL.
I've attempted writing the second chapter but I'm at loss for how to start it. I hope it'll surprise you :D

[170683]

Once you mentioned England, I knew something was fishy...!
Write a sequel, this one doesn't even seem finished! And Yamada suits the character so unbelievably much! :D

[aminahlovespatd]

WOW.
AMAZING FEEDBACK KAREN.

Seriously, what do you honestly think of this?

[170683]

I THINK IT SUCKS BECAUSE YOU LEFT A CLIFFHANGER.
That's what I think!

[aminahlovespatd]

SERIOUSLY. DID IT HAVE A CRAP STORYLINE? WAS IT BADLY WRITTEN? DO I HAVE ISSUES? DO YOU EVEN WANT TO ANSWER THESE QUESTIONS?

[gee_dragonnn]

Nooooooo! Cliffhanger man!
Hmmm keito seems so mysterious now,
I mean they're mean to be bestfriends but he didn't tell Yamada what's going on with him and Aoi!!
Hmph!

I like how you started it, but I wonder how the whole biological family is
going to tie in with yamada keito and aoi's love triangle! Lol!!
mannnn it I bet you it's gonna be an awesome twist!

Can't wait for chapter two :)

[aminahlovespatd]

HAHAH!
Everyone keeps complaining about the cliffhanger so I guess I did a good job at making everyone curious about what may happen next :D

THANK YOU FOR SUCH A DETAILED RESPONSE :D
I appreciate it :D

I'm re-writing the whole domestic abuse thingy into something else. It'll surprise you. Hopefully.

[youandme_94]

omg, aminah. this is really good! and it's your first! i love it.. even though i don't know who those people are. (:

(and no, i'm not fake kindness)
^_____^
i'll be waiting for the contiuation. (:

[aminahlovespatd]

Sorry for the late reply.
As you can see, I haven't been on LJ in days.

First of all, thank you for taking your time in reading my crap fanfic. And second, thank you for your compliments :)
Although I disagree, thank you :D

I don't think I'll go on with chapter two. Cos so far, I've written two paragraphs and I'm at loss for what to do next.

[uedatatsuya012]

haha nice i really enjoyed this. Hope you do your best and update soon XD I'm Chelsea but online im called Rikki. Nice to meet ya!

[aminahlovespatd]

AWW. Thank you <3 I'm so happy that you liked it. I thought it was a failure.
I've started chapter two and by start, I mean like two paragraphs, but I'm currently trying to finish all my homework. So I'm really sorry for delaying my update.
Hello Chelsea. Nice to meet you too :D I'm Aminah! But feel free to call me whatever you want :)