Due to Sanju's overwhelmingly kind response, here is my first crappy fanfic.
I wasn't originally planning on posting this but due to chanjuu 's kind response, I've decided to post it up. Please note that this is the first time I've ever written a fanfic so it isn't as good as everyone else's.
I can't promise a sequel cos I have no idea where I am going with this.
This is only a draft and this is also temporary and will be deleted ( Read more... )
I can't promise a sequel cos I have no idea where I am going with this.
This is only a draft and this is also temporary and will be deleted ( Read more... )
It was really good as you already know :D
NOW YOU MUST WRITE SECOND CHAPTER ASAP.
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It's your fault cos you just HAD to like to so much :)
I WANT TO WRITE A SECOND CHAP.
But I have no idea where the story is going. I was originally planning on changing Yamada's past into something else rather than a domestic problem but since you're curious about the scar thing then I have to carry on with this storyline.
:D
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hahahah. its your fault for writing such a kickass, cliff hanging first chapter ;)
you have to now lol i wont stop bugging you otherwise
whatever you chose as yamada's scar problem, i know it will surprise me to no end :D
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But I don't believe that it was a kick ass cliff-hanger. It was alright but it wasn't THAT good. I mean, you're one is still way better compared to this piece of crap. THAT WAS TOO NEGATIVE. Fine. It's okay for a first effort. Yes. Agreed.
LOL.
I've attempted writing the second chapter but I'm at loss for how to start it. I hope it'll surprise you :D
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No, Ami, it is not crap!
Think, think!
Of course it will :) And I want another cliff hanger HAHAH
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I'M TRYING :)
I've started writing chapter 2. But I've decided to change the part where I talk about how his family is messed up. If won't change anything about him getting a scar but I just don't want to make him have domestic problems. So I'm gonna edit chapter one when I get the chance to :D
I SHALL THINK OF ANOTHER GREAT CLIFFHANGER especially for you :D
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how his real family is/was messed up or his foster family? cuz i do wanna know more about his real family. but i guess readers would wanna read more about the scar and less about domestic problems, so i agree.
YAY. i honestly cannot wait :D
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LOL. Then I shall continue being one :)
I was going to talk about how his real family was messed up and resulted in him having trust issues. But I want to change it a little. I won't tell you too much cos I want it to be a surprise :D
Don't worry. The story behind the scar will be interesting. But sad.
:D
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Haha all right, I won't ask much and wait for the chapter, which you need to put up ASAP!!
i like sad stories. Mhmm.
Btw, I posted up chapter 6 :D
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I missed you too and our long conversations :)
I've started writing it. I just need time to finish it. I'm seriously thinking about starting a petition to lessen the amount of homework given to high school students.
Me too. Sad stories are more inspiring and moving.
YOU POSTED UP CHAPTER 6?
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I'M SO HAPPY THAT I NEED TO PEE.
I'M GONNA GO READ IT RIGHT NOW BEFORE I EXPLODE OUT OF HAPPINESS :D
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PETITION. I approve. I wanna do it too now. lol
I agree. Sad stories <3
HAHAHAHH Your response made my day ♥
Lemme know what you think :)
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I love our conversations. Even though I'm confused with which one to reply to first :D
LOL. WE SHOULD START ONE TOGETHER :D
YAAAAAAY :D
I'm glad it made your day. Cos the fact that you finished chapter six made my day :D
I still haven't read it though cos I want it to be my reward after I finish my homework :D
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WE SHOULD! That's a great idea, we can do a chapter each!
AWWW. Why do you have to be so cute!
Ohh finish quickly! I want to know what you think. And I'm working on chapter 7 because I cannot work on essay anymore. Fuuu
Do you read mangas?
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But at least our conversations last :D
There are some people who I talk to that just stop replying all of a sudden.
AGREED.
I will :D
I had an essay due in yesterday and the theme was 'betrayal' and I was too lazy to write up a new essay so I stole the storyline from my fanfic. LOL. That's so lazy. True?
YES I READ MANGAS :D
I started reading Death Note. And Hana Kimi :D
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What should it be about?
OMG THAT'S COOL not lazy, haha i would totally do that too :P that sounds like such an easy essay though D=
OOOH. Do you like fluff mangas? gah, Death note ♥
You should get Plurk! Then we can talk to each other :)
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ME TOO <3
I don't know why but I find it easy to talk to you. I wish everyone was like that. Maybe because we have a lot in common? I don't know. But I find it harder to talk to people who don't share the same interests as me.
Anything you like :) You can think of it.
LOL. I felt so guilty after I handed it in. But I was lazy and when I'm lazy, I do whatever I need to do to avoid doing more work. LOL. I'm so weird.
Fluff mangas? I've never heard of that.
DEATH = AMAZINGMANGA<3
I envy whoever thought of the plot behind Death Note. It's so unique.
Plunk? LOL! I don't know what that is but it sounds like a television show for children :D
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