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trapped in cages, stumbling on lies

May 14, 2012 00:00

Title: trapped in cages, stumbling on lies
Author: alifeofourown
Pairing: Harry Styles/Louis Tomlinson
Rating: Teen
Word Count: 2,319
Summary: "I want you to love me like you see me." "And how's that?" "Like I'm broken."
Warnings: Possible triggers that aren't really triggers, hurt/pain/sadness and hints at fake!ot5
Dedication: Giving this to lifeisafantasy2 because I have been ( Read more... )

rating: teen, band: one direction, person: niall horan, pairing: harry/louis, genre: angst, person: harry styles, pairing: ot5 tbh, person: louis tomlinson, person: liam payne, person: zayn malik

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alifeofourown May 14 2012, 04:52:13 UTC

crying because feels tbh this was not at all how i wanted this fic to end up being keni it was supposed to be all about louis fixing harry's breaking not louis breaking because harry left D:

it is shit so idk what you're talking about. also shhh there are not good lines in here at all shh

colazitron May 14 2012, 09:58:24 UTC

Um, yes. So, this conveys that sense of despair and broken-ness absolutely perfectly. It's so bleak and damaged and. Wow. Thank you for that. *goes off to find chocolate or something*

But Harry fixes himself and then he comes back to fix Louis.

alifeofourown May 14 2012, 22:28:46 UTC

If I had some chocolate I would share it with you. Also did you just thank me for giving you feels? That's definitely not something I'm used to.

It's possible that there might be a happy sequel but I don't think so. I kind of like leaving it where it is.

Thanks you for reading! (:

oh_darlingg May 14 2012, 19:37:59 UTC

This was really good, if nothing but heartbreaking omg.

alifeofourown May 14 2012, 22:30:33 UTC

why thank you so much (: I'm glad you liked it and thank you for reading!

ruby_crowned May 15 2012, 07:29:23 UTC

no get these feels away from me *clings desperately to them*
omg but that was actually really good

alifeofourown May 15 2012, 07:31:23 UTC

omg no no stop what are you saying shhh shh there are no feels this was not good step back step away

(i hope it hurt though~~~)

thanks for reading!

aboutademongirl May 16 2012, 01:49:18 UTC

Oh, god. I think my heart just cracked. I think I also just accidentally stepped all over the pieces of it on the floor. IT'S YOUR FAULT. SOBBING AT THIS ONESHOT.

alifeofourown May 16 2012, 02:03:15 UTC

Oh no! I didn't mean to break your heart! HOW DO I FIX THIS PROBLEM!?

thank you so much for reading and commenting though. warms my heart even though yours is now broken.