trapped in cages, stumbling on lies

[alifeofourown]

Title: trapped in cages, stumbling on lies
Author: alifeofourown
Pairing: Harry Styles/Louis Tomlinson
Rating: Teen
Word Count: 2,319
Summary: "I want you to love me like you see me." "And how's that?" "Like I'm broken."
Warnings: Possible triggers that aren't really triggers, hurt/pain/sadness and hints at fake!ot5
Dedication: Giving this to lifeisafantasy2 because I have been

Comments

[saralisse]

I just... This was.... Holy shit. I'm not sure I've got a heart left after this - I think I lost it trying to will Harry and Louis back to wholeness.

Your writing is beautiful, love, and there really are tears streaming down my face because “Will I ever feel like I’m not broken again?” and just ajnga;krsfd perfect, okay?

[alifeofourown]

oh no I didn't mean to make you cry! I'm sorry! if it helps at all I was willing for them to get back together the entire time I was writing it because this was not how this fic was supposed to turn out at all.

thank you so much for the kind words and thank you for reading and commenting. it means a lot to me. (:

[saralisse]

No, don't apologize! It means you're good and I really don't mind. I needed a good cry.

I think the way the fic turned out is honestly perfect and you captured something very real with it.

[alifeofourown]

oh goodness no stop you're being far too nice. perfect? I don't even know what to say to that wow that's...thank you so much. ♥

[stardancer_9]

I pretty much agree with just about everyone else comments here. Right now I'm to busy crying to really respond with one of my own. Other than I really want to smack the crap outta Harry right now.

A story that can reduce me to tears is a damn good story. Thank you. I would love to see a follow up to this. I'm not sure Harry deserves to get Louis back tho. Louis deserves someone like Liam, Zayn or Niall. (and I'm a Harry/Louis fan, but a Louis fan all the way)

*gasp* I'm not even sure Chocolate could fix how I feel right now. *sniffle*

[alifeofourown]

I didn't mean to make you cry omg I'm sorry! There might be a follow up. I'm not quite sure yet because everyone seems to be asking me for sequels to everything I've written and I don't have time to think let alone write. But if I have time I will definitely write a sequel! (:

I'm an OT5 fan if we're honest so I'm really okay with any of them being with anyone. They're all made for each other anyway.

If I had chocolate I'd give you some. ): I didn't mean to make you cry.