NaNo Ridiculousness Chapter 10

[alien_writings]

Hey there,

Here's Chapter 10 of "I Prefer the Mind Control." I'm trying to make actual chapters now. Enjoy the ridiculousness!

Day 1, Day 2, Day 3, Day 4, Day 5(ish), Chapter 6, Chapter 7, Chapter 8. Chapter 9

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“Being a person sucks right now,” I muttered.

Comments

[theun4givables]

There's a nice wide range of emotions in this one, coming from Dylan. It's obvious why he seems to have borderline self-esteem issues, now, what with knowing his backstory a bit more thoroughly and all. Xan is such a sweetheart, though, and doesn't think anything of it. Especially since partnerships work so differently on Zimara than they do on Earth. What Dylan did really isn't really a bad thing, all things considered.

Of course, their plan isn't likely to work, but I guess we'll see how that goes, lololol.

[alien_writings]

Nope, their plan isn't likely to work, haha. The Soulbreaking itself isn't likely to go smoothly, either, what with having to fight sparkle demons or whatever my brain actually comes up with, should my plot go as I think it will. My brain, it is a ridiculous place.

Also, yay my character actually has a variety of emotions! ^_^

[n3m3sis43]

I love the name of their high school band! Awesome People is an awesome band name. :D

Awww, I'm glad Xan still wants Dylan after finding out about his Dark and Troubled Past. Although to be honest, what he did wasn't that awful. Well, sleeping with your best friend's girlfriend is pretty bad, but whatever. Teenagers. Just wondering... was the car crash that killed Leo a random coincidence or was he driving badly/not paying attention because of the problems he was having with Sandy?

[alien_writings]

That's a good question. I don't actually know the answer, but it is entirely possible that it was due to his driving badly because of the problems he was having with Sandy.