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alien_writings

NaNo Ridiculousness Chapter 7

Nov 10, 2012 20:58

Hey there,

Here's Chapter 7 of "I Prefer the Mind Control." I'm trying to make actual chapters now. Enjoy the NSFW ridiculousness!

Day 1, Day 2, Day 3, Day 4, Day 5(ish), Chapter 6

---------When the door to the interrogation room creaked open, I thought my remaining lifetime might be extremely short. Fuck. I grabbed Xan again. If whatever was on ( Read more... )

character: firi, nanowrimo, nano novel 2012, character: dylan, nsfw (actual sexual content - really!), character: xan, pairing: xan/dylan, trigger: dubcon, pairing: firi/dylan, series: i prefer the mind control

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theun4givables November 11 2012, 02:18:07 UTC

Unfffffffffff

Seriously het is harder for me to be into at times but this -- oh dear god this was hot. Firi can fuck Dylan any time she wants, damnit. Because holy hell.

Then again, choking and slapping and riding are all weaknesses of mine soooooo.

I love reading this, though, even when there aren't hot parts involved. Dylan's just a fun narrator to read, lol.

alien_writings November 11 2012, 03:20:09 UTC

Yay, I'm glad you enjoyed it because het is harder for me to get into as well and thus harder to write. The kinky aspect made it hotter for me, too. I'm like "wow, I actually find this hot," so that was good.

Dylan is fun to write. Even if he does use too many adverbs because it's NaNo and I need the word count, haha.

theun4givables November 11 2012, 03:57:41 UTC

Het is harder for me, too. Hence my only one smut where it was m/f and not m/m. I like Mari enough now I might write happy Mari/Savin times. Maybe. Possibly.

I am a fan of adverbs so they don't bug me in writing. Use them all the damn time in my own, lol.

n3m3sis43 November 11 2012, 03:28:21 UTC

Hottttttt. You know I don't even LIKE het, so this is a high fucking compliment coming from me. I think the choking and general kinkiness helped. I love me some breathplay smut.

Damn fuck, Dylan is hilarious. Although he might need a nap or something because his constant duties as a plaything seem to be wearing him out. Do they have some kind of special energy-giving mind control they can use on him to help with that?

alien_writings November 11 2012, 16:11:14 UTC

Aw, thank you for the compliment. <3 Het isn't my thing, either, but as I was writing this, I got pretty damn into it. I'm glad it worked for you because considering the main character, world and story line, there's probably going to be more scenes like this.

I'm glad you think Dylan is hilarious. I seriously enjoy writing him. And Dylan really does need a nap. Luckily, I think he's going to get one in the next chapter. If Xan lets him sleep. I don't know if they have magic energy-giving mind control, but it's entirely possible that they have it in some form, haha.