A Woman Undone: Part 59/?

Feb 07, 2008 22:02

Hellooo citizens of the gutter!  I hope I haven't kept you all waiting too long but just long enough.  I am prepared to receive all of your death threats after you read this update.  Don't worry (or be disappointed)...it's safe to read this part at the office like so many of you do...not that you'd heed my warning if I said otherwise.  You're all ( Read more... )

title: a women undone, author: whatisayouth, length: short fiction (chapter)

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blondjustice February 8 2008, 06:40:04 UTC
First! LOL

Liv called him DICK... that so made me laugh.

Get update as always.

How does Dick know? He's so clueless... hmmmm

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whatisayouth February 8 2008, 06:48:16 UTC
Thank you, hon. I knew the dick line would be a good one for everyone. It's like one point for Liv, zero for the dick! And we all love that. You'll just have to see how Mr. Clueless knows....

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blondjustice February 8 2008, 06:55:09 UTC
Tease! Sheesh...look forward to seeing where that goes. And the dreaded Robin was yet again mentioned... no, please, no!

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whatisayouth February 8 2008, 07:04:35 UTC
Ah yes, the dreaded one...well, someone's gotta help dick stir up some trouble.

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huntkitty February 8 2008, 06:55:49 UTC
no no no you can;t do that. no no no.. now i going to think about it until you update it. you got to update tomorrow please..

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whatisayouth February 8 2008, 07:05:22 UTC
LOL...I told you you'd want to kill me. When I wrote this update and ended it there, I was very satisfied...I know that's evil. Kill me now!

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huntkitty February 8 2008, 07:14:55 UTC
you like torturing don't you. not fair i so look forward to next update.

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whatisayouth February 8 2008, 07:17:20 UTC
Eh, I just like keeping you all wanting just a little more...that's probably torture huh?

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cabotfan February 8 2008, 08:10:53 UTC
I'm back from my holidays and I see you're back with fantastic and delicious chapters....yummy. You know what I mean ;)
And I really wanna know how "Dick" the dumbass suddenly became so observant and knew about AO. Hmm.. I think he's probably referring to something else, I don't think he's that smart or that observant

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whatisayouth February 8 2008, 08:56:12 UTC
Hi there! It's good to see you here in the gutter with the rest of us...lol. Don't you wonder how dick the dumbass has a successful career as a lawyer? Don't you have to be smart and observant for that kind of thing? And it's obvious that he's dumb and dense...lol. He must have paid is way to the top. Creep!

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cabotfan February 8 2008, 15:16:28 UTC
I think probably Dick the dumbass paid someone to do his lackey work for him. Probably a PI or something. Workwise I don't think he's a dumbass, just an ass - a slimey one. Hahaa...

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whatisayouth February 8 2008, 21:49:49 UTC
Yeah, unfortunately he's a really good attorney as much as I hate to admit it. And he has the money to hire someone to do a little spying, so we'll see what happens, eh?

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djshiva February 8 2008, 08:58:41 UTC
whoa!

dammit!

i can't frickin' wait for the next one. the next few days are going to be pure hell. you sure love to tease us with the cliffhangers, don't you?

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djshiva February 8 2008, 09:01:15 UTC
and for the record, i think he may just be throwing it out there to see if liv bites. robin may have told him about the tension and he just wants to test. that's my bet.

liv should tread carefully in this conversation, methinks.

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whatisayouth February 8 2008, 09:03:28 UTC
That's a really good idea you have there. Bating her, hoping she'll screw up and reveal something. Hmmm...

I would think that in any conversation with Richard you'd have to tread carefully. He's too creepy and too sneaky and conniving to trust. He might use anything you say against you later.

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djshiva February 8 2008, 12:46:43 UTC
well he IS a lawyer. (no offense meant to lawyers; kinda their job to get in there and trip people up.)

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hysteria74 February 8 2008, 10:51:52 UTC
*ARGH* !!! *ZOMG* What "exactly" does Richard know is the big question here I think? Evil cliffhanger!!!

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whatisayouth February 8 2008, 21:43:21 UTC
You know when you say evil, I just smile right? LOL. Frustrating liking this story, isn't it? Sawry...lol

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