A Woman Undone: Part 59/?

Feb 07, 2008 22:02

Hellooo citizens of the gutter!  I hope I haven't kept you all waiting too long but just long enough.  I am prepared to receive all of your death threats after you read this update.  Don't worry (or be disappointed)...it's safe to read this part at the office like so many of you do...not that you'd heed my warning if I said otherwise.  You're all ( Read more... )

title: a women undone, author: whatisayouth, length: short fiction (chapter)

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bondozer February 8 2008, 11:12:38 UTC
Bloody Hell!!!
Now I'm not panicking or anything....yet....'cos I'm hoping that 'may I call you Dick' (priceless) is just referring to the fact that Alex has told him that she is staying at Olivia's, not that he's twigged that there's anything going on between them!!!?????
Loved this update...you are very naughty....just when we think it's safe to relax you throw a formidable spanner in the works!!
And I adore you for it, all the twists and turns and everything.
Like I said, you are very naughty, but very, very nice.
XXXJoolsXXX

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whatisayouth February 8 2008, 21:45:48 UTC
You said bloody hell! I love that! I had to throw in a little jab in there towards dick since that's what we all refer to him as...that and some other things that I don't Olivia would have been able to get away with as well. Everyone is very curious as to what Mr. Dense knows, if anything substantial. I know it was a naughty thing to do and an evil place to leave the chapter, but I think you'll be coming back for more...lol. You're so nice...you know I think you're extremely sweet too.

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rebelsom February 8 2008, 11:21:30 UTC
evil, Evil, EVIL cliffhanger!!!!

As much as I love this update, you have to update again soon so that this isn't the only thing I am thinking about during my classes today.

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whatisayouth February 8 2008, 21:46:46 UTC
Ahh you have class today? Hope I'm not a distraction...lol. I told you I was welcoming the death threats. I'm glad that you loved it despite its evilness. Thank you.

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trinity09 February 8 2008, 12:33:46 UTC
okayyy....this can go so many ways..."Im waiting"...

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whatisayouth February 8 2008, 21:47:34 UTC
Waiting...waiting...still waiting? The possibilities for this are vast, and I guess that's the killer part.

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iloveliv February 8 2008, 14:04:06 UTC
OHHH MAN!!! This gets better and better everytime....

NEW POST ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! =]

kthanks! hahah

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whatisayouth February 8 2008, 21:48:56 UTC
Is that excitement I see brewing? Well thank you for your enthusiasm and for liking it so much. I'll update as soon as I can.

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pooloutback February 8 2008, 15:27:32 UTC
Great chapter, just got home from uni and checked straight away, now i'm late for lunch.

I don't mind what happens in the middle, since there has to be a happy ending where Liv and Alex end up together right? As long as we know that then its all alright (that is how its gonna end right??).

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whatisayouth February 8 2008, 21:50:56 UTC
You worried I'm gonna throw an obstacle in their path that is insurmountable? Methinks you are...lol. Sorry to make you late for lunch, but I love your excitement for reading my updates. Thank you!

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