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[bondozer]

 
Ficlet.
Loss.
A/O
PG.

I have never written anything in my life before, but I watched 'Loss' last night for the very first time ever. And it really moved me. ('darholland' knows what I'm trying to say). And I felt compelled to write something. And this is it.
Not sure what the protocol is for posting such things because I'm relatively new to everything

Comments

[triniliyah]

wonderful! you really brought all those feels I had about 'Loss' right back, so sad, and I know that I'm not the only who noticed the that perfect tear came down Olivia's cheek unchecked as the taillights and the flashing lights illuminated it's path. That look on her face was...just wow...Loss was the perfect name for that episode, I mean it's simple, it's unmessed around with...pure and total loss. That episode was beautiful acted, I loved the way Elliot stood there like the sentinel. And Olivia, just 'how long?' that was one of the most beautiful pieces of television (and subtext I might add.) the look between Alex and Olivia spoke volumes. "This new feeling was more than just heartbreak, more than just emptiness

[bondozer]

Hi trini

[triniliyah]

oh yea, i love Kishs's writing ('A Woman Undone') she's awesome

[bondozer]

Oh! I see you are on first name terms with our author of the year

[lucydiamond64]

WOW! I am so impressed...that was an excellent first attempt in the writer's foray!! You really should write more A/O's for us. Show the young'ins their not the only ones who are talented. You really brought Liv's pain to life!

[bondozer]

Hi 'lucy

[darholland]

i'm sorry it took me soo long to update. just been a busy time. great for a first timer, and if there is anything else that comes to mind with you writing make sure to post it, because i will surely read it. great job!!!!!

[bondozer]

Thankyou 'dar'....
It's all your fault, you started me on this! Haha!!
I've just watched 'Serendipity'
Ewwww!! Casey really did know how to make an entrance didn't she?
It's not that I hate her character, as such, but Alexandra Cabot she is not, and having just seen Loss and then this episode back to back it really does hammer home to you the real inadequacy that is Casey Novak!! Dear of her!!!
Lol x x x

[darholland]

yeah admit it, you don't like her just as much as we do!!! like you said the women is no alex cabot... besides her fashion sense looks like a blind man gave it to her!!!

[bondozer]

Hahaha!!!
Yeah, I don't not much like her more than you do!!!
I don't think you can say the words 'fashion sense' and Casey Novak' in the same sentence can you?
Well, not without choking mid-eay through, anyway, haha!!!
You gotta give her her due though, she is a trier.
But I guess that's just the point, Alex never had to try!!!
Alex.....please come back!! Wishful thinking? Yeah!
Lol x x x

[svuiconess_70]

this was an excellent piece much better than other Loss piece i have read.

[bondozer]

Thankyou!
I think I'm blushing!
And I really appreciate you taking the time to comment.
I really love the icons you make. Perhaps I'll have a bash at making one, once I figure out how to do it!!
Lol x x x

[triniliyah]

i have to say i love your icon ;) it's hilarious :D

[whatisayouth]

This is extremely powerful! It embodies the epitome of loss and regret (and "Loss" the episode). It's so sad and deeply moving. Thank you for posting this and for the comments between you and Trini. You're both so incredibly sweet!

[bondozer]

Thankyou, I'm so glad you liked it.
As for Trini and I, we simply speak the truth!
You are one helluva writer!!!
Lol x x x

[triniliyah]

bondozer is absolute correct, we speak-eth the truth! *winks at bondozer*

[bondozer]

*Winks back*