[LJ Idol Season 9 Topic 20: Intersubjectivity]

Sep 10, 2014 01:58

This week is an intersection, and I worked with lapis_lazuli615. Her entry on the topic of Shubusa can be found here and while both entries can be read separately, I suggest you read hers first ( Read more... )

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reckless_blues September 10 2014, 02:05:29 UTC
I like the last few lines.

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agirlnamedluna September 14 2014, 22:43:01 UTC
Thank you!

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tonithegreat September 10 2014, 02:09:01 UTC
How creepy! I felt bad for the crew as they were picked off, even from this perspective. But also a little bad for the ship, too.

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agirlnamedluna September 14 2014, 22:43:19 UTC
The ship's all alone, after all, too :) Thank you!

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lapis_lazuli615 September 10 2014, 02:55:39 UTC
hoooooleeeeee shit. I love you when you do this (take my story and raise it to another level), and yet, you also make me a bit crazy. lol

Brava.

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agirlnamedluna September 14 2014, 22:43:37 UTC
Thank you :) I very much enjoyed this second intersection ^_^

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uncawes September 10 2014, 03:24:54 UTC
I read Laz's story first, so it was a tell tale from early on that your story was focussed on the ship. A cross between the first Star Trek movie, 2001, and Christine, and very creepy. None of that is bad - I loved this story.

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agirlnamedluna September 14 2014, 22:44:16 UTC
Thank you! While I've not seen the first Star Trek movie, I saw the other two, and I see what made you think that :D

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kickthehobbit September 10 2014, 04:49:32 UTC
OK, this is fantastic.

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agirlnamedluna September 14 2014, 23:46:40 UTC
Thank you :D

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