[LJ Idol Season 9 Topic 20: Intersubjectivity]

Sep 10, 2014 01:58

This week is an intersection, and I worked with lapis_lazuli615. Her entry on the topic of Shubusa can be found here and while both entries can be read separately, I suggest you read hers first ( Read more... )

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halfshellvenus September 10 2014, 05:46:12 UTC
I love the creepiness of this, and the idea of all of those accidents not being accidental after all... one of them simply because the victim began to suspect that other conciousness was there.

Happy, he called it.

Mine, I called it.
My favorite part, just for how ruthlessly wrong it is. :D

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agirlnamedluna September 14 2014, 23:47:43 UTC
Thank you :D It sounded so deliciously wrong when writing it.

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mistearyusdiva2 September 10 2014, 09:08:21 UTC
Gawd .... I love what you have done here. Totally creepy and great intersection. And all those crew getting knocked off in 'accidents'. And then my favourite line .....

Happy, he called it.

Mine, I called it.

I let them be - after all, there were many years to go.( How benevolent .. or so we think for a moment )

It's the simple things, he wants, and so do I.

So I wait. One day he will come to me..... Creepy

I loved

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agirlnamedluna September 15 2014, 01:56:15 UTC
Thank you!

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bleodswean September 10 2014, 14:58:58 UTC
Great job as the "other". Creepy!!

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agirlnamedluna September 15 2014, 01:56:24 UTC
Thank you!

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ryl September 10 2014, 15:14:43 UTC
I am thoroughly creeped out now. Well done!

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agirlnamedluna September 15 2014, 01:56:31 UTC
Thank you!

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roina_arwen September 10 2014, 15:23:14 UTC
When Starships Go Crazy, chapter 1. :)

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agirlnamedluna September 15 2014, 01:56:51 UTC
:D

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