Comments | adrenalineshots: The mute and his silent tale

adrenalineshots

The mute and his silent tale

Jul 08, 2009 18:01

Two dark silhouettes filled the red dust, cut against the warm glare of the setting star, their shadows stretching out on the empty street like giants waking up.

The sounds of sharp spurs clapped against the ground as they walk forward, sure steps, loose strides and confident postures.

They were both tall, almost as tall as their black shadows drawn ( Read more... )

season 1, sam, dean

Comments 23

phorenice July 9 2009, 16:13:43 UTC

Oooh, I love it! Cowboy!Boys and emotional baggage!Dean and H/C and sniff...
Great beginning with the Wild West atmosphere and grumpy Dean ruining the mood :D.

One thing, though:
The, slinging loosely from their hips, were strapped tight to their long legs. Relaxed fingers moved idly inches away.
Something's missing from this sentence.

BTW:
I can't wait for "Bean Stalker" to be completed, so I can read it in one go.

adrenalineshots July 9 2009, 16:26:11 UTC

*slaps head* their guns... it's their guns *g*
Thank you for that :D It's all fixed now. And cowboy!Boys ROCK! The show should totally do a wild west episode :D

"BTW:
I can't wait for "Bean Stalker" to be completed, so I can read it in one go."

Cool! Chapter 5 should be up in a couple of days and after that I think there will one more, so, stay tune :D

deangirl1 July 9 2009, 17:01:50 UTC

I think you actually want hostler.... the gun sits in it and it is strapped to the leg...

Great story! I had a sneaking suspicion that if she was interested in mutes, Dean was going to be on the menu...
And DEADWOOD -- squeee!!!!

adrenalineshots July 9 2009, 22:28:28 UTC

Hehehe... the lady liked her men pretty and silent...

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hpaa July 9 2009, 19:44:45 UTC

Wow, I didnt see that coming.. nicely done.

adrenalineshots July 9 2009, 22:27:46 UTC

Love your little icon :D
Thank you ;)

gatorpez July 10 2009, 00:41:54 UTC

I enjoyed this fic. Thank you. :-)

adrenalineshots July 10 2009, 07:18:13 UTC

Glad you did :D

randomstasis July 10 2009, 03:28:49 UTC

I liked Dean's complaining, and that he listened to the ghost before she tried to kill him-and I liked that he managed to speak, if only the essentials..
Excellent story- thanks!

adrenalineshots July 10 2009, 07:19:36 UTC

I have a thing for poor mute Dean... what can I say?
Thank you for reviewing!

jackfan2 July 10 2009, 03:36:56 UTC

What I wouldn't give for some gelid air here in Texas right now *fans self* And then you go heatin' up the joint with the boys in tight cowboy-cut jeans, chaps and hats. Then, that picture of Jensen at the end. *fans self*

I can die a happy woman now.

But I'd rather not, if that's alright. Meeting Jensen is on my bucket list and that's not something I'm going to pass without doing!!!

Once again, you killed me with this ending. I love the evol plots your mind comes up with for Dean. *evil kackle*

adrenalineshots July 10 2009, 07:21:57 UTC

Gelid, you say? Wouldn't a cold, soft breeze be enough? ;)
And don't save stuff like meeting Jensen for your bucket list, dude! What's the point of meeting the guy when you're 110, with no teeth and one wonky eye? Get to the good stuff while you're young and hot ;)

jackfan2 July 10 2009, 15:48:10 UTC

Nope. Dude, gelid is just what I'm looking for.

Hey!!! Who's to say that I won't be one hot mama' when I'm 110!? And, if I have a wonky eye, so much the better. I'll get me a pirate-esque eye-patch, walk up to him, draw my sword, ready to wisk him away and say "Avast ye land lubber, prepare to be boarded..."

Oh.. *eyetwitch* Boarded? Dude. There go my thoughts for the day. Right in the gutter *splash*