The mute and his silent tale

[adrenalineshots]

Two dark silhouettes filled the red dust, cut against the warm glare of the setting star, their shadows stretching out on the empty street like giants waking up.

The sounds of sharp spurs clapped against the ground as they walk forward, sure steps, loose strides and confident postures.

They were both tall, almost as tall as their black shadows drawn

Comments

[phorenice]

Oooh, I love it! Cowboy!Boys and emotional baggage!Dean and H/C and sniff...
Great beginning with the Wild West atmosphere and grumpy Dean ruining the mood :D.

One thing, though:
The, slinging loosely from their hips, were strapped tight to their long legs. Relaxed fingers moved idly inches away.
Something's missing from this sentence.

BTW:
I can't wait for "Bean Stalker" to be completed, so I can read it in one go.

[adrenalineshots]

*slaps head* their guns... it's their guns *g*
Thank you for that :D It's all fixed now. And cowboy!Boys ROCK! The show should totally do a wild west episode :D

"BTW:
I can't wait for "Bean Stalker" to be completed, so I can read it in one go."

Cool! Chapter 5 should be up in a couple of days and after that I think there will one more, so, stay tune :D

[deangirl1]

I think you actually want hostler.... the gun sits in it and it is strapped to the leg...

Great story! I had a sneaking suspicion that if she was interested in mutes, Dean was going to be on the menu...
And DEADWOOD -- squeee!!!!

[adrenalineshots]

Hehehe... the lady liked her men pretty and silent...

[jackfan2]

EEP!!! *runs off to continue betaing Bean* Sorry.. I got distracted by the pretty images (in my mind) of Dean in cowboy attire. And that pic at the end there of Jensen. My . God .

Ok. Done now.