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I Call The Shots - chapter 2

Feb 03, 2011 03:44

Title: I Call The Shots - Chapter 2
Pairing: Onew/Taemin
Length: 5865
Genre: Romantic Smut/M/s
Rating: NC17
Summary: After the Night of the Whip, things are strained between Taemin and Jinki.(Established Relationship)
A/N Because I didn't want to sound like an even bigger pervette than I actually am, I have aged Taemin up in this fic so that he's a ( Read more... )

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Comments 34

stjoan4eva February 3 2011, 08:52:45 UTC

Ninja!spot <333

addicterated February 3 2011, 08:54:02 UTC

woot, yay Ninjas :)

stjoan4eva February 3 2011, 09:21:00 UTC

*takes slow deep breaths*

Ok. I've surpassed the urge to just leave you a bunch of meaningless gibberish keysmash.

That was a *great* chapter. I loved the guilt spiral, the misunderstanding seemed logical and natural, the buildup and sweetness and frustration...fabulous, just fabulous.

The gold star line: There's a hundred answers on Taemin's tongue. His love-addled brain runs through a dozen images, scenarios, fantasies but all of them have one thing, one person in common. He turns his head and kisses Jinki softly, sweetly. The kiss is almost innocent despite the situation, the undercurrents of primal heat and secret needs.

I have one tiny, itty bitty issue.

...how could you get me all worked up and leave me hanging like that, you evil evil fic tease?!?!

I'm going to be sitting here like an addict rocking back and forth waiting for the next section. DO YOU SEE WHAT YOU'VE DONE?!

jinkibumiminho February 3 2011, 09:36:44 UTC

What she said..
Ditto

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kyttenfae February 3 2011, 08:59:47 UTC

“Gonna come all over me, Tae?” Jinki purrs in Taemin’s ear, fingers easing between them to curl around Taemin’s erection ( ... )

addicterated February 3 2011, 09:03:21 UTC

They are seriously just this sweet in my head...I love them so much. I am so happy you enjoyed and liked it. <3333333333333333

jinkibumiminho February 3 2011, 09:34:07 UTC

Seriously? You stopped right there? WTF? Evilllllllll author.

Damn, baby.

Your kinky!Jinki just hits the spot (you know...THAT spot). As we see him grow more confident in public, I can imagine some serious wickedness going on in that lovely brain of his.

"Please sir, I want some more..."

addicterated February 3 2011, 17:18:49 UTC

Oh yes....Kinky!Jinki is an evil evil man, in a loving kinda way. There will be more, promise. *laughs* Sorry about the bad stopping point. It had to stop there. I dunno why.

addicterated March 3 2011, 01:38:02 UTC

http://addicterated.livejournal.com/79262.html updated

min7girl February 3 2011, 11:00:37 UTC

blessed day! Ontae in the morning with dom-love and angst. Can it get better? I don't really know. I shall venture forth to find out!

min7girl February 3 2011, 15:35:39 UTC

OK first thing to come close to this fantastic post. Changmin doing his best (aegyo) Acts of Cuteness for Kyuhyun. Adorableness starting at 1:10. Way cute I tells ya! But this fic still beats it. I shall continue my efforts to find anything better.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iP4xTvkxVo0

evilvalenstrife February 4 2011, 08:21:23 UTC

OMG! I saw that and passed out from sheer aegyo-overload!!!

addicterated February 4 2011, 17:49:42 UTC

Yunho cannot do aegyo, he's too, something. Changmin however <3

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simneesee February 3 2011, 20:45:56 UTC

Smutty angst! Yes please! /but then a cliffhanger- boo! This was a great chapter, and of course Key started it up lol

addicterated February 4 2011, 17:50:09 UTC

Key is always the instigator lol. Glad you liked it :)

addicterated March 3 2011, 01:38:35 UTC

updated

addicterated March 3 2011, 01:38:46 UTC

http://addicterated.livejournal.com/79262.html