I Call The Shots - chapter 2
Title: I Call The Shots - Chapter 2
Pairing: Onew/Taemin
Length: 5865
Genre: Romantic Smut/M/s
Rating: NC17
Summary: After the Night of the Whip, things are strained between Taemin and Jinki.(Established Relationship)
A/N Because I didn't want to sound like an even bigger pervette than I actually am, I have aged Taemin up in this fic so that he's a ( Read more... )
Pairing: Onew/Taemin
Length: 5865
Genre: Romantic Smut/M/s
Rating: NC17
Summary: After the Night of the Whip, things are strained between Taemin and Jinki.(Established Relationship)
A/N Because I didn't want to sound like an even bigger pervette than I actually am, I have aged Taemin up in this fic so that he's a ( Read more... )
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Ok. I've surpassed the urge to just leave you a bunch of meaningless gibberish keysmash.
That was a *great* chapter. I loved the guilt spiral, the misunderstanding seemed logical and natural, the buildup and sweetness and frustration...fabulous, just fabulous.
The gold star line: There's a hundred answers on Taemin's tongue. His love-addled brain runs through a dozen images, scenarios, fantasies but all of them have one thing, one person in common. He turns his head and kisses Jinki softly, sweetly. The kiss is almost innocent despite the situation, the undercurrents of primal heat and secret needs.
I have one tiny, itty bitty issue.
...how could you get me all worked up and leave me hanging like that, you evil evil fic tease?!?!
I'm going to be sitting here like an addict rocking back and forth waiting for the next section. DO YOU SEE WHAT YOU'VE DONE?!
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Ditto
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I ...it needed to end there. I"m soooooorry. *hugs*
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