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[lycoris]

Fandom 2 - Detective Academy Q

Title: Pain
Rating: PG
Summary: Ryu reflects on what it is to be in pain. Spoilers for episode 38.

Comments

[emeraldsword]

ooh, you get the dizzy, distant-yet-clear feeling of going into shock really well. Good job :-)

[lycoris]

Thanks very much, I'm really glad that you liked it!

[teis_stories]

Silly pain! Logic is for kids!

Nice story, there XD

[lycoris]

Thanks very much, I'm glad you liked it!

[iamisaac]

Ooh, this really reminds me of Jay's description of what it was like to fall out of a tree onto a metal spike, which I guess is similar to being stabbed, except in the leg. He said it just sort of itched, and then he realised he could see the bone in his leg. That's TMI, isn't it?

Anyway, it works, obviously, because it's so accurate I think.

[lycoris]

Not really TMI, I found it very interesting! Although rather ouchy to hear about. Did it START hurting after he saw the bone? Thank you for sharing that and I'm glad you felt the fic worked, yay! :D

[iamisaac]

No, I don't think it did. But he sort of freaked at that point and suggested his friend called an ambulance...! It hurt later, when he was in hospital.

[lycoris]

Yeah, if I could see my own bone, I think I'd suggest ambulance was a good idea too! And hope it got there with painkillers BEFORE the pain kicked in ...

[versipellis]

That's really good - you really made me believe in what he was feeling. And the line about 'things that ought to be good...' is sad in a subtle way, for me anyway ^^

[lycoris]

Thanks very much! :D I'm glad that it was belivable and yes, that line was meant to be sad so thanks for saying that!

[lycoris]

*blushes* Thanks very much! I'm glad that you liked it and that the last line worked - I was really pleased when that game into mind! *Hugs*