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12avocados

sin título part 3/?

Jul 26, 2009 21:24

Title: sin título part 3/?

Pairing: The same and no other

Rating: 14/15 or however your jurisdiction describes it

Disclaimer: Please, if I owned these characters I'd never have had to write this. No infringement meant, I make no profit, etc. I have great respect for the actors who did a brilliant job portraying that other ending. No offence is ( Read more... )

it's okay kids she lives, assuaging our suffering, ¡Lola! 5 second guest appearance, ficity fic, needs a better title than untitled, lhdp

Comments 34

lovelyafterglow July 27 2009, 03:02:17 UTC

This story is so fantastic. I love that you're not shying away from how traumatic their experience was...and how difficult it's going to be to move past it.

I think the angst in this case is warranted, and you're handling it in a really realistic and heartfelt way.

12avocados July 27 2009, 15:08:01 UTC

Thank you!

raven_bard July 27 2009, 03:54:16 UTC

It's like perfection in one reading. Gods the angst...I love angst. Does that make me a crazy person? You write beautifully. I was basically heartbroken by the end of this chapter. Can I have more soon please?

12avocados July 27 2009, 15:09:31 UTC

Thanks! I don't think it's all that great, but it is angsty. I will try to write part 4 in the next day or two.

sia_9 July 27 2009, 04:24:42 UTC

the description of the screams during the nightmares made me feel Pepa's pain. i thought it was great. they r trying to figure out how to pick up the pieces and they have changed so much. i wish this had happened instead of what did last season. great job 12

12avocados July 27 2009, 15:10:52 UTC

Thank you! I wish this had happened too, although really I would have let everyone live.

mmm_kekse July 27 2009, 06:56:16 UTC

I shouldn't have read this moments before work *brushes away tears*
so beautiful though <3
please continue <3

12avocados July 27 2009, 15:12:28 UTC

Thanks! Don't cry, it all works out in the end.

mmm_kekse July 27 2009, 18:22:26 UTC

I take your word on that! xD
But I really enjoyed it. I love all the angst. And a good cry once in a while (is that weird? I think I'm weird :( LOL)
looking forward to the next part <3

em_czee July 27 2009, 07:17:20 UTC

"Now," I said, in a serious tone, "Now I think you're hot."
lol! this is such an awesome fic now i have to go back and find the first two parts :P thanks heaps for sharing!

12avocados July 27 2009, 15:12:47 UTC

Thank you!