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12avocados

sin título part 3/?

Jul 26, 2009 21:24

Title: sin título part 3/?

Pairing: The same and no other

Rating: 14/15 or however your jurisdiction describes it

Disclaimer: Please, if I owned these characters I'd never have had to write this. No infringement meant, I make no profit, etc. I have great respect for the actors who did a brilliant job portraying that other ending. No offence is ( Read more... )

it's okay kids she lives, assuaging our suffering, ¡Lola! 5 second guest appearance, ficity fic, needs a better title than untitled, lhdp

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12avocados July 27 2009, 15:03:20 UTC

Thank you! I'm enjoying your story too.

av8rwinn July 27 2009, 01:46:48 UTC

Love it! I want more . . . I think I can handle this story a bit more now.

12avocados July 27 2009, 15:03:52 UTC

I'll work on part 4. Just remember, it will all be okay in the end.

elisa_trapt July 27 2009, 02:11:07 UTC

Oh, my, how did I miss this one? I am SUCH a sucker for good angst, and so far you're delivering in spades - all of it, Pepa's nightmares, watching Silvia sleep to reassure herself, the depression that Silvia has lapsed into, the mourning for their collegues. I love the slow pace of this, very realistic. And yet, still there's humor, for all the sadness - I definitely laughed at "I thought you were weird." B/c that's exactly what little wild Pepa would have thought about the little nerdy, future scientist. :)

I am SOO looking forward to the next chapter!

12avocados July 27 2009, 15:05:03 UTC

Thanks for the comment! I'm glad you like it and I am full of angst so there will probably be more.

musicbuttons July 27 2009, 02:20:09 UTC

Wow! I am loving this story. Its so heart felt and in character.

12avocados July 27 2009, 15:05:16 UTC

Thank you!

calleighsgirl July 27 2009, 02:43:54 UTC

Oh, I really missed your sensitive writing. Thank you for the update.
Even though I'm more into the happy fics, this is one of my favorites.
I love how you always bring their childhood in. Those passages always make smile.
And especially: “If I had known you would be my wife I would have looked for a prettier shell”
That was just beautiful.
Thank you again!

12avocados July 27 2009, 15:06:45 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you like it. Don't worry, it will get happier.