the bottom line [1 / 3]

[uberchrome]

Title: The Bottom Line
Pairing: ot12, really
Part: 1 / 3
Genre: Romance, Angst, Action
Summary: Kim Jongin is finally out of the asylum and Kyungsoo is a roamin' catholic

Comments

[lekikoz]

So like i'm the hugest mafia geek lover and i'm sooooooo happy that i found this fic tucked away here but girl you have to unleash this awesomeness to the world. I love this soooooo much! You have an OT12 here but are not afraid to not make them all buddy buddy which is awesome!
I see them on opposite ends and that's rare.
Yifan and lay, god i kray (cry) because YES they make the perfect cop/investigator couple like omg and sehun... I have a feeling hide and seek was with luhan? Or am i delusional here? :|
AND GRANDPA SUHO LITERALLY! I adored that part so much because yes, he is old, warm, caring and sigh.. Perfect.
But most of all the kaisoo. I love the way you purposely use do/kai and kyungsoo/jongin, it so makes sense!
Long story short, i'm excited for the next chapter sweety and best of luck! :D

[uberchrome]

oh my god can i tell you how happy this made me?
i don't know. i have these mini ideas and they keep stacking up and that's just it ;}
but srsly, i actually want to advertise this fic more through comms or my other accounts in other sites, but i figured it would be better to do that once i finish the whole thing :)
ok i need to stop smiling stupidly because of your comment. i really appreciate it & i'll update this as soon as i finisht he next one (which will be long long long).
& thank you again! :)

[lekikoz]

[uberchrome]

[uberchrome]

aww, thank you for reading & commenting.
there's just something pretty about the whole mafia concept, right?

i hope you'll look forward to the next chapter! :)

[uberchrome]

hi! so possible, one of lj's disadvantage is the lack of notice for any updates
but idk sincei'm pretty new. so uh.
the next part is up [ here] and i hope you'll like it! :)

[sayanim]

how come your fic doesn't have more comments OTL

i don't usually comment on fanfics but i love it so much that i just had to TAT
i love the way your writing just flows, the scenes are really short but it's so easy to understand what's going on and all, well can i just say that i love your writing? it's simple and neat in a very nice way~
also the characterizations and the universe they're living in, i'm in love with everything asdfghjk
i'm really looking forward to the next part, and i'm sure it doesn't suck! ;v; good luck ♥

also i just have to say that i loved your newest fanfic (senpai noticed me) ohmygod i really need to read more of your fics they're perfect.

/sorry lame and useless y.y

[uberchrome]

either because i'm a noob, or i try to just keep this here to finish before putting this in other places :)

i normally don't do comments, too. i only comment on the ones that i really like, and idk about you but thank you for reading and commenting, nonetheless. and your words mean a lot to me, i'm glad you liked it, despite the errr, not so usual style.

and i'll make sure to link the next part here once i'm done :)
/hugs because yes, senpai noticed me/
i tend to get sidetracked by new ideas while writing fics, so i'll get back to 'the bottomline' and finish this :)

[sayanim]

yes that's what i was trying to say! ^^
and you're welcome of course <3 i really like your style (already said so haha), idk if it's that "not usual" (i don't read english literature OTL i'm not a native english speaker as you probably noticed) but everything seems faster and i like it~

/hugs back (hahaha omg i had to think twice i was wondering why you were saying senpai noticed me OTL /dumb)
i think it's the same for everyone tbh OTL always getting new ideas... it's nice and annoying at the same time. but take your time!

[uberchrome]

i'm not a native speaker, too but i try because my family's moving here and there & i won't be able to eat if i don't know how to english. i don't even...

i'm getting ideas after another on this one so i might put the next part up in a few days :)
happy valentines! c:

[luhanz]

What gets him on edge however, are t-shirts that are slowly losing the scent of its owner, journal pages that’d never get written down. Sometimes, death isn’t as scary as losing evidences of your existence. THIS LINE, THIS LINE IS PERFECT.

can't wait for the next part! ^__^

[uberchrome]

Thanks for reading! And I'll update this soon :)
/that's actually one of my fave lines there.

[uberchrome]

hi! so possible, one of lj's disadvantage is the lack of notice for any updates
but idk sincei'm pretty new. so uh.
the next part is up [ here] and i hope you'll like it! :)

[ataraxyy]

I freaking hate you, like freaking sobs

Please please don't forget your Singapore-AFF-friend when you become as big as changdictator, fumerie, adorableprince etc

I can literally see you blooming into a great writer, no waitttt- better than that.

Fly bbbbb flyyyyy.

[uberchrome]

me.
forget.
you.

are you freaking serious or..?
& i think it's really weird how i'm at the point where i think my writing is okay, but i've never felt more pressured. i'm glad that people understand my non-sense, but i really don't know. i just know that you're one of the people who inspire me to work harder [and here i promised myself to save your valentines message for valentines]. because if it wasn't for you, i wouldn't have reached out to a wider audience or try to start somewhere new, or set my goals higher.

so really.

thank you.

[ataraxyy]

;; eff you, stop being all sentimental and nice because I don't think I deserve all of this.

But really, you are a good writer (always have been) and you are so freaking capable of being so much better, until uberchrome-is-so-famous and I just felt like I am not worthy anymore(?) it's just cause your writing is so impeccable now and I'm just overwhelm with so many feelssss T^T you are constantly improving whereas I'm slowly declining because thou focusing on studies.

Remember when we used to just write Luyoon all the way and you were writing all the cheesy fics because somebody hates angst? I just feel like we can never go back to those days and that you are not just one- but already several steps above me.

Melodramatic meishi is melodramatic sryyy ok ok *sobs and hands myself a tissue

[uberchrome]

Please don't, you're making me cry and I'm in my parents' room.

You get me all sentimental for bringing those good old days. I never imagined myself writing angst or posting to livejournal. I was literally biting my nails the first time I posted in SNCJ. I feel like everyone's just so almighty and beyond me. But then, you know, sometimes I keep quiet and that's when I learned to differentiate the good ones from the bad.

There are plenty here in Lj who writes wonderfully, but they lack plot and most of all, feelings & idk how I realized this. I thought 'hey, maybe I can pull this off'.

Thinking about our Luyoon days makes me feel nostalgic. It's like looking at childhood pictures and having mini glimpses of what happened or what I felt at that particular time.

and please believe me when I say that you're one of the reasons why I work hard and tried to improve, really. You're such a great friend who does nothing but lift me up and I suddenly feel like a graduating kindergartner hanging on to your shirt.This whole fic is gonna be