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the bottom line [1 / 3]

Mar 02, 2013 23:44

Title: The Bottom Line
Pairing: ot12, really
Part: 1 / 3
Genre: Romance, Angst, Action
Summary: Kim Jongin is finally out of the asylum and Kyungsoo is a roamin' catholic

( Jongdae isn’t scared of knives or kidnappings, threats or committing murder. He wouldn’t be in this business if things like that pulls him undone. What gets him on edge however, are t-shirts that are slowly losing the scent of its owner, journal pages that’d never get written down. Sometimes, death isn’t as scary as losing evidences of your existence )

t:the bottom line, g:action, g:romance, p:kaisoo, idonteven, p:baekyeol

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ataraxyy February 11 2013, 14:23:07 UTC

;; eff you, stop being all sentimental and nice because I don't think I deserve all of this.

But really, you are a good writer (always have been) and you are so freaking capable of being so much better, until uberchrome-is-so-famous and I just felt like I am not worthy anymore(?) it's just cause your writing is so impeccable now and I'm just overwhelm with so many feelssss T^T you are constantly improving whereas I'm slowly declining because thou focusing on studies.

Remember when we used to just write Luyoon all the way and you were writing all the cheesy fics because somebody hates angst? I just feel like we can never go back to those days and that you are not just one- but already several steps above me.

Melodramatic meishi is melodramatic sryyy ok ok *sobs and hands myself a tissue*

Go publicize your fics, post them in community or wait for a sncj- event. Don't just package them like that ok, good fics deserve all the sun(wtf am I writing) I'll so my best to help u!!!!

Ok ok I shall stop here before thou's incoherency gets worse.

uberchrome February 11 2013, 14:47:58 UTC

Please don't, you're making me cry and I'm in my parents' room.

You get me all sentimental for bringing those good old days. I never imagined myself writing angst or posting to livejournal. I was literally biting my nails the first time I posted in SNCJ. I feel like everyone's just so almighty and beyond me. But then, you know, sometimes I keep quiet and that's when I learned to differentiate the good ones from the bad.

There are plenty here in Lj who writes wonderfully, but they lack plot and most of all, feelings & idk how I realized this. I thought 'hey, maybe I can pull this off'.

Thinking about our Luyoon days makes me feel nostalgic. It's like looking at childhood pictures and having mini glimpses of what happened or what I felt at that particular time.

and please believe me when I say that you're one of the reasons why I work hard and tried to improve, really. You're such a great friend who does nothing but lift me up and I suddenly feel like a graduating kindergartner hanging on to your shirt.

This whole fic is gonna be for you mei, once I finish this :)

ataraxyy February 11 2013, 14:57:21 UTC

Yes yes, LJ is a whole lot different from AFF. LJ is many notches higher in terms of standard, much more competitive and the readers here are very selective too. In AFF, many of the readers actually don't have English as their first language. On the other hand, LJ have not only authors, but readers with a good grasp of their English etc.

It's a different and tougher battle out here but I believe that you can do it! Just give it some time and your fics will be known ok? (Y) (not a butt crack, but a thumbs up)

And I feel like a proud mum watching you soar. I can't believe it, it's only yesterday when we were wallposting each other about being unsure in stepping into LJ. Can you believe it? Wallposting? In AFF? IDE. T.T

I thought that you were already good back then. But now you're better. God, lien.

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