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QR / Chapter 16 - Brand New Sight

Jan 25, 1996 22:25

Title: Quiet Revolution / Chapter 16 - Brand New Sight
Author: street scribbles
Rating: PG 13
Summary: Hermione's date with Blaise finally happens. Some more stuff happens. And then . . . even more stuff happens. Do you guys still read my summaries? :P
A/N: This chapter couldn't have happened without you, burger face. :) And you know that. I know ( Read more... )

Comments 66

bk11 January 25 2006, 10:47:57 UTC

Who is this burger face you speak of? She sounds intelligent, mature, and insightful ( ... )

streetscribbles January 25 2006, 11:00:02 UTC

I was like, WTF! I have a comment already? Who the fuck is awake at THIS HOUR? (You know, because Americans rock and they're the only people I think of. UHHHH. :D). And then I was like AWW STACY!

Where's the icon that you said you were gonna use?! WASTE OF MY FUCKING TIME!

She sounds intelligent, mature, and insightful.
Well. Not really. She's into ass slapping though, so she's okay.

Don't make fun of the Mormons, S. You'll go to hell. Haha and I already told you the shower stuff was cause of you. Your response was something like "Yep. Wait it out. WAIT THE FUCKER OUT! DON'T LOSE FUCKING HOPE!" Wise words babe.

I didn't approve of this sentence. This is what happens when I leave you to your own devices. Oh, fuck, that's an awesome sentence. He wants you to turn around . . . and assume the position.
WTF! HAHAHAHAHHA. That line was ALWAYS there, S. You read it outloud on the phone, even! DON'T BE PERVY. They're in GRADE school.

Because Italian is the food of Blaise's ancestors. Ahh, I gotcha! *WINK*
lmfao.

Cuz the only reason ( ... )

bk11 January 25 2006, 11:28:27 UTC

I tell you things in confidence, and you just keep going off and blabbing them. Thanks, B. THANKS. STFU about the ass slapping please. Stuff like that . . . *embarrasses* me, okay?

"You read it outloud on the phone, even!"

Oh come on! You totally can't hold me accountable for any of the shit I say, especially when I can't remember what the fuck I was babbling about. Did I point this out the first go-round, too? Hahaha, turn AROUND. HAHAHA.

NIGHT!

bk11 January 25 2006, 11:01:41 UTC

"verbatim of course - Malfoys didn’t really enjoy the art of subtlety, you see ( ... )

streetscribbles January 25 2006, 22:08:34 UTC

I thought if I didn't talk, they wouldn't figure out that I'm a big lame-o. But mostly, they were like, "Dude, say something, girl!" And I'd be all awkward and saying, "I'm . . . tired today. Sorry." :P
That is so ME, it's SCARY. I was kind of reserved on first dates, ALWAYS. Cause I was like, well I totally be myself cause they might think I'm fucking retarded, or weird, or both . . . AND boring. And I wouldn't know what to say, so I'd say I was tired too. And I said it so often, that I'd believe it . . . and actually get tired. Haha.

Dude, that's hot. That line. I'm feelin it. I'm feelin it. Nice, B. Nice. :)

AND

Aw, this Chocolate frog passage was really sweet. It humanized him. And it's also sad because he's soooo dead. Ugh.

I really, really liked those two reactions from you, S. They made me happy. :) Cause I really like the line, too. And the chocolate frog scene was totally me trying to flesh out his character a bit. SPOT on, BK, gjgj. :D

bk11 January 25 2006, 11:13:51 UTC

"be said would come out on its own. “I hope . . . you have a good life, I really do, Granger ( ... )

streetscribbles January 25 2006, 22:16:27 UTC

"Let's get you back to your room," was NOT attached with a sexual connotation, even though it SO looks like it is. GRADE SCHOOL, S.

Aw, I know what you mean now, when you said you started to like Hermione as you were working on this. I like her too. But B, we must continue to fight the evil! FIGHT IT!
Dude. Did you know, way back when I wanted to write this story - the main focus was on Hermione? And I was like, well I like D/Hr so I'll make it D/Hr, but I really wanted to concentrate on Hermione's character and really work on it, weaknesses and strengths and change and good and bad. And then I started to get annoyed with her for some reason (*COUGH*) and so rereading THIS chapter for me brought back what this fic's original intent was. And I can see you cringing. But yes, it was indeed HERMIONE.

:P

You're just sad to see Blaise go because random images of Pharrell won't pop pleasantly into your head while reading future chaps. But it's okay, I understand.

Blasian mystique . . . HAHAHAHAHA.

bk11 January 25 2006, 23:26:58 UTC

Wellllsss, I never liked Hermione. So I never approach stuff trying to explore her and give her depth. And like, the more and more I sit with it, the more I don't want to write her anymore. There are days where I'm like . . . okaaaay, I quit. D/P, or H/P or D/R, or R/P, or D/G alllll the way. And I'm so crazy, B. Like, the more and more people try to convince me that she's awesome, the more I don't like her.

SO YES. I AM CRINGING! :P

Noo, nothing can beat Caublasian! Nothing!

bk11 January 25 2006, 11:24:05 UTC

"He tried so hard ( ... )

omg ICON! :D lmfao. streetscribbles January 25 2006, 22:20:08 UTC

Did I already ask you if this is a Biblical ref?
Yes. And when you did, I was like "are you fucking serious?"

And you were like, "Yes."

And then I was like, ". . ."

IT'S NOT A BIBLICAL REF, STACY.

Aww, this was AWESOME feedback, Stace. My ego is totally obsese right now. Wheeeee. THANK YOU!! <3 I feel so much more proud of this chapter after all the changes, so that's totally you. Thanks again. :)

Re: omg ICON! :D lmfao. bk11 January 25 2006, 23:39:41 UTC

It was my pleasure. My pleasure! You were super easy to work with too. Like one other girl has you beat, but you are second for easiest person to talk to about her writing. No ego. No pretensions. You laugh when I made fun of stuff--and I was like, WOW, a girl who can laugh at her writing. I love that. :D

applecede January 25 2006, 13:41:02 UTC

omg! Harry's dead?! What's up with Draco? And Blaise! And Hermione! WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON! WHAT AM I DOING HERE?

:) :) :)

I AM SO HAPPY TO SEE THIS. Plus, yesterday I was super depressed but it turns out the fact that yesterday was calculated to be the most depressing day of the year may have something to do with that.

*beam beam beam* Beaming like a spaceship.

- Lord of the Flies

streetscribbles January 25 2006, 17:09:42 UTC

HARRY IS *SO* DEAD. I hope STACY reads this! :D :D :D

AW, TWIN! What happened? Email me or I'll see you on AIM soon okay? I don't know if I had THE most depressing day yesterday, but I did have a pretty crap day too. Twinses are sad. :(

Talk to you soon babe! <3

bk11 January 25 2006, 23:13:57 UTC

"HARRY IS *SO* DEAD"

Fuck you to the gates of HELL, BETTY!

streetscribbles January 26 2006, 02:39:59 UTC

PUH-LEAZ. Is that supposed to OFFEND me?! ;D