3325: A flower tale - Scarlett Marie Black, Elizabeth "Eli" Annabell Potter
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Since this is the month of October I decided that the Flashback Sue's will deal with the ones featured on Halloween. This one is from 2003 and had a Native American Sue.
TITLE: A flower tale
PERPETRATOR: Severus's Daughter
SUE-O-METER:
(toxic)
COVER/BANNER ART: It is a clip of their avatar which happens to be a picture of Snape from the movie.
SUMMARY:”Lilly and James had twins. A boy and a girl. Scarlett Marie Black took the girl to keep her safe so Lilly and James could run with Harry. Scarlett was murdered and the baby got a label thanks to Scarlett's husband. Now Elizabeth aka Eli will have to clear her name. But will she found out she is a girl instead of a boy? Spanking of a child and teenager”
FULL NAME: Scarlett Marie Black, Elizabeth “Eli” Annabell Potter
SPECIES: Scarlett is the murdered woman who was \supposed to take care of Eli. Eli is of course supposed to be Harry's twin.
HAIR: n/a
EYES: n/a
MARKINGS: She's twelve in the second chapter.
POSSESSIONS: Eli has the Potter ring
CONNECTION TO CANON: Scarlett ends up killed because her husband though she cheated on him and Eli ends up in the orphanage. The second chapter has Eli whine about how her father beats her and haters her, death eaters show up and she changes back into a girl and decides her name is now Elizabeth. Despite being dumped on the orphanage with no information she knows when her birthday is and Severus knows who she really is. They're going to turn her against her brother. (All right... that just jumped from an awful rating to a toxic.) It jumps to the forth year and the ball and Severus wishing that she was his daughter. A song is slapped in and she flirts with Draco who doesn't care that he has fallen in love with a Potter. In chapter four Severus decides since she can't be his daughter he is also going to hit on her. The Malfoy's and Severus decide to jump to the light. Chapter six has them married.
ORIGIN: On top of hiding their daughter they turn her into a boy.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: The Potter's decide to turn their daughter into a girl. She then gets labeled as a murderers son. She has been cutting herself since she was seven. Apparently Eli's been running around with only the name “Eli”.
NOTES: The writer claims on their profile that they are nineteen. If she's telling the truth she is likely special needs. So... if you decide to review... you know the rules.
SAMPLE:
Then she left very quickly and she was killed by her husband. Of course Scarlett was the youngest of the Black family. She never had children and her husband thought she cheated on him because he saw the baby. The baby looked nothing like him, the ministry took him away and give the baby a label that she could never erase she was now the murderer's son.
Lilly and James were killed, Harry was given to his Aunt and Uncle. They were muggles and they hated magic. No one knew of the potter twin or there was a potter twin.
Since this is the month of October I decided that the Flashback Sue's will deal with the ones featured on Halloween. This one is from 2003 and had a Native American Sue.
TITLE: A flower tale
PERPETRATOR: Severus's Daughter
SUE-O-METER:
(toxic)
COVER/BANNER ART: It is a clip of their avatar which happens to be a picture of Snape from the movie.
SUMMARY:”Lilly and James had twins. A boy and a girl. Scarlett Marie Black took the girl to keep her safe so Lilly and James could run with Harry. Scarlett was murdered and the baby got a label thanks to Scarlett's husband. Now Elizabeth aka Eli will have to clear her name. But will she found out she is a girl instead of a boy? Spanking of a child and teenager”
FULL NAME: Scarlett Marie Black, Elizabeth “Eli” Annabell Potter
SPECIES: Scarlett is the murdered woman who was \supposed to take care of Eli. Eli is of course supposed to be Harry's twin.
HAIR: n/a
EYES: n/a
MARKINGS: She's twelve in the second chapter.
POSSESSIONS: Eli has the Potter ring
CONNECTION TO CANON: Scarlett ends up killed because her husband though she cheated on him and Eli ends up in the orphanage. The second chapter has Eli whine about how her father beats her and haters her, death eaters show up and she changes back into a girl and decides her name is now Elizabeth. Despite being dumped on the orphanage with no information she knows when her birthday is and Severus knows who she really is. They're going to turn her against her brother. (All right... that just jumped from an awful rating to a toxic.) It jumps to the forth year and the ball and Severus wishing that she was his daughter. A song is slapped in and she flirts with Draco who doesn't care that he has fallen in love with a Potter. In chapter four Severus decides since she can't be his daughter he is also going to hit on her. The Malfoy's and Severus decide to jump to the light. Chapter six has them married.
ORIGIN: On top of hiding their daughter they turn her into a boy.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: The Potter's decide to turn their daughter into a girl. She then gets labeled as a murderers son. She has been cutting herself since she was seven. Apparently Eli's been running around with only the name “Eli”.
NOTES: The writer claims on their profile that they are nineteen. If she's telling the truth she is likely special needs. So... if you decide to review... you know the rules.
SAMPLE:
Then she left very quickly and she was killed by her husband. Of course Scarlett was the youngest of the Black family. She never had children and her husband thought she cheated on him because he saw the baby. The baby looked nothing like him, the ministry took him away and give the baby a label that she could never erase she was now the murderer's son.
Lilly and James were killed, Harry was given to his Aunt and Uncle. They were muggles and they hated magic. No one knew of the potter twin or there was a potter twin.