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I decided to play a game of “follow the reviews” since writers have a habit of liking stories similar to their own but yesterday's story dead ended so I decided to jump back to the reviews on Misguided by Jenevieve.k. The game ends when I can't find any stories that haven't been featured. Featured may or may not include the sequels to certain stories.
That also said someone lined a featured Suethor to the entry in which their fic was featured. While it could have been worse the Suethor was rather irked about finding the only experience they had with Pottersues was the entry in which their story was featured.
The person who linked them is thirteen so they didn't know that it is against the rules here to link the writers to the entry. Mind you, we don't mind the writers finding out their stories were featured but a good deal of Mary Sue writers struggle to take criticism in a mature manner. Thus we let them find the stories on their own. There have been incidents in the past that were far from being nice.
TITLE: For the Heart of a Werewolf
PERPETRATOR: jesskalynn4
SUE-O-METER:
(bad)
COVER/BANNER ART: There is a picture of a girl on a phone in the back seat with glasses and a picture of a guy below that. The top character is supposed to be the Sue and the bottom one is supposed to be Remus. It is in black and white.
FULL NAME: AlyAna Luna Rose Black
SPECIES: She's a Feramorp.
HAIR: “curly black as night hair”
EYES: blue-grey
MARKINGS: “a pale complexion and regal looks
POSSESSIONS: “thick black glasses
CONNECTION TO CANON: Other then being
ORIGIN: Because she is a Feramorph because “my family founds a 'disgrace' since I'm classifed a half-breed.” and is in Ravenclaw.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: She's a Feramorph. “A Feramorph is a rare, natural Animagus, a shape-shifter. I have the ability to change into any animal, magical or not-magical plus I can use some of the magical aspects of the animals without having to shift.”
NOTES: I would normally give this a rating of awful, but the first chapter made me think I would get an okay or good out of this one. I mean, I didn't think the Black family would treat their daughter badly because she has glasses and is a bit odd. And yet I can also see it occurring. Then we got the whole Feramorph thing in the second chapter. While it is true that there is an ability to transfigure oneself to other human forms naturally there is no ability to transform oneself into an animal naturally. As Hermione said in the second book, changing the human form to another human form isn't the same as changing the human form to an animal form.
That also said I found something cute on this Suethor's profile. Draco/Hermione is the only pairing under their pairing list that doesn't include an OC or Bella Swan.
SAMPLE:
"What are you doing in here, Kitten?" he whispered as his sister cuddled up into his chest. He strained to hear her reply, but all he got was a mumbling into his chest. Lifting her chin with a finger, he asked her once again why she had wandered into his room (though this is a quite often experience between them living in the household the did).
"I don't want you to leave me here alone, Sirius." His baby sister finally answered, tears swimming in her eyes. "Who is going to talk to me, play with me, or protect me? I'm going to be all alone. Mother is always trying to make me dress up and being "the perfect daughter", Father never looks or even takes to me unless it's to say something mean, and Regulus always picks on me. You're the only one who likes me and now your leaving me." tears finally falling down her small face.
With a sigh, Sirius removed her glasses and pulled his sister closer. "I will always protect you Kitten. No matter how far away I am. If you need me all you have to do is say, I may not be able to come but I will do anything I can to help. I'll write you letters and before you know it, I'll be home for Christmas break and then after that it'll be summer in no time. Okay? Besides, in one year you'll be going with me to Hogwarts and we'll never have to be apart again." He whispers to her, begging with anyone that could her for her tears to stop. He could never handle seeing his baby sister cry.
That also said someone lined a featured Suethor to the entry in which their fic was featured. While it could have been worse the Suethor was rather irked about finding the only experience they had with Pottersues was the entry in which their story was featured.
The person who linked them is thirteen so they didn't know that it is against the rules here to link the writers to the entry. Mind you, we don't mind the writers finding out their stories were featured but a good deal of Mary Sue writers struggle to take criticism in a mature manner. Thus we let them find the stories on their own. There have been incidents in the past that were far from being nice.
TITLE: For the Heart of a Werewolf
PERPETRATOR: jesskalynn4
SUE-O-METER:
(bad)
COVER/BANNER ART: There is a picture of a girl on a phone in the back seat with glasses and a picture of a guy below that. The top character is supposed to be the Sue and the bottom one is supposed to be Remus. It is in black and white.
FULL NAME: AlyAna Luna Rose Black
SPECIES: She's a Feramorp.
HAIR: “curly black as night hair”
EYES: blue-grey
MARKINGS: “a pale complexion and regal looks
POSSESSIONS: “thick black glasses
CONNECTION TO CANON: Other then being
ORIGIN: Because she is a Feramorph because “my family founds a 'disgrace' since I'm classifed a half-breed.” and is in Ravenclaw.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: She's a Feramorph. “A Feramorph is a rare, natural Animagus, a shape-shifter. I have the ability to change into any animal, magical or not-magical plus I can use some of the magical aspects of the animals without having to shift.”
NOTES: I would normally give this a rating of awful, but the first chapter made me think I would get an okay or good out of this one. I mean, I didn't think the Black family would treat their daughter badly because she has glasses and is a bit odd. And yet I can also see it occurring. Then we got the whole Feramorph thing in the second chapter. While it is true that there is an ability to transfigure oneself to other human forms naturally there is no ability to transform oneself into an animal naturally. As Hermione said in the second book, changing the human form to another human form isn't the same as changing the human form to an animal form.
That also said I found something cute on this Suethor's profile. Draco/Hermione is the only pairing under their pairing list that doesn't include an OC or Bella Swan.
SAMPLE:
"What are you doing in here, Kitten?" he whispered as his sister cuddled up into his chest. He strained to hear her reply, but all he got was a mumbling into his chest. Lifting her chin with a finger, he asked her once again why she had wandered into his room (though this is a quite often experience between them living in the household the did).
"I don't want you to leave me here alone, Sirius." His baby sister finally answered, tears swimming in her eyes. "Who is going to talk to me, play with me, or protect me? I'm going to be all alone. Mother is always trying to make me dress up and being "the perfect daughter", Father never looks or even takes to me unless it's to say something mean, and Regulus always picks on me. You're the only one who likes me and now your leaving me." tears finally falling down her small face.
With a sigh, Sirius removed her glasses and pulled his sister closer. "I will always protect you Kitten. No matter how far away I am. If you need me all you have to do is say, I may not be able to come but I will do anything I can to help. I'll write you letters and before you know it, I'll be home for Christmas break and then after that it'll be summer in no time. Okay? Besides, in one year you'll be going with me to Hogwarts and we'll never have to be apart again." He whispers to her, begging with anyone that could her for her tears to stop. He could never handle seeing his baby sister cry.