I decided to play a game of “follow the reviews” since writers have a habit of liking stories similar to their own but yesterday's story dead ended so I decided to jump back to the reviews on Misguided by Jenevieve.k. The game ends when I can't find any stories that haven't been featured. Featured may or may not include the sequels to certain
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yeah ... about that ... sorry i kind of saw it somewhere else so I thought it was OK :( i will remember in the future though
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From the looks of things on that review page, you actually reviewed that story three times with the intention of bringing this journal into a bad light and cause drama.
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Alright, so this character can transform herself into animals both magical and non-magical- is that even possible in the Potter verse? I know you can't transform naturally into an animal form, but I don't think you can transform into a magical animal like a unicorn or a griffin or... a basilisk... or whatever HP creature is in existence in the book.
I believe that is the only thing that I have to say for right now.
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I could accept a natural animagus if it actually served some purpose in the story. I'm fairly certain this won't. The ability to mimic magic abilities of the animals, though... It'd have to be really important to the story for me to swallow that.
That this ability gets her classified as a half-breed makes no sense at all.
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I didn't notice the half-breed until you pointed out. No... wouldn't make her a half breed.
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