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Sep 02, 2019 10:15

Title: Journey To Survive
Perpetrator: Cam-Moggy (Something tells me with how I’m going about looking for Sues right now she has the potential of popping up again as she has three other stories which are crossovers with OCs which aren’t OCs in them.
Sue-O-Meter: Toxic
Cover/Banner Art: I’m guessing the cover is a picture from the Anime?
Summary: “Join Brienna as she follows her cousin Luna on their journey to survive on an unknown planet filled with large animals and unknown creatures.”
Full Name: Brienna Potter-Black
Species: We’re supposed to believe this isn’t Harry. Nice try Suethor.
Hair: “She has pure raven hair in low loose plaits and emerald green eyes.” So, I was wondering what this would look like. Think Elsa’s hair from Frozen as an example of what I found, or at least that style of hair. For some reason I don’t see that as a style a female Harry would like, though.
Eyes: Not described, but likely green.
Markings: 14, 170cm, 51 kg, hourglass and C cup - how the hell does this Sue have blood type E? Suethor, we do not classify people by their Rh blood type. They’re classified by the RBCs. Then there is the writer’s, “she has two tattoos that represent her previous life. The first tattoo is on her right arm written in Greek. It has her mum, dad, godfather and uncle's name shown. The second tattoo is of a stag and deer, black grim like dog and a brown wolf in a field of lilies. This is placed on the right side of her stomach under her breasts.” Why do people insist on giving additional traits to canon characters like this which honestly make no sense even if we’re talking a female version?
Possessions: “She is wearing a long blue top, a scarf, black leggings and some black boots.” The above quickly gets changed to “an emerald green bra and underwear, a blue turtleneck dress with an emerald green belt, black thigh socks, and black knee boots with blue ribbons.” What a winning combination.
Connection to Canon: The first chapter goes into how our “not an OC” character has magically shrunk to be fourteen again because of their magic and environment. She also loses her scar that she got at a much younger age because scars aren’t cool like tattoos. The second chapter opens up with us being treated to a shower scene. She uses her magic to make her dress less tight because she can’t be bothered to buy clothes which fit in the first place. The writer then proceeds to shove her into the existing plot, but this female Harry couldn’t be bothered to wake her cousin up and even admits she forgot to simply because the writer didn’t want to change the plot and actually be creative. Apparently one gallon is 10,000 pounds. No, no it’s not. Anyways, I’m not going to read any farther than this since I know this plagiarizes Mujin Wakusei Survive. I actually looked up the first episode to check.
Origin: As you can guess from the previous entry which can be found here, this is yet another story where the writer simply dumps their OC - actually, it is a female Harry so not an OC - into another world.
Special Abilities: For some reason this female version of Harry. At least this Sue doesn’t like hamburger and fries as their favorite food.

Notes: I just realized I need a tag for bra size without using the word bra. >_< Does Sue Cup work? It doesn’t really zing though even though I’m trying to put a spin on the whole House Cup thing. Maybe just have House Cup under the looks?

Sample:

It is weird being in my 14-year-old body. Well not completely. My body has merely shrunken down. I still have the figure I worked so hard to get, my tattoos but all my scars have disappeared, and my body is at the proper weight, the weight I should have at the age of fourteen.

Of course, I still have my trunk filled with all my belonging (Family books, treasures, Money, items belonging to Mama, Papa, Pa and Uncle moony, my baby items, plenty of different clothes, food and other items that I need).

The main reason my body was shrunken down in the first place was due to my magic. A second chance and due to being in a different environment and climate, it was shrunk so my body could get accustomed to it. This used most of my magic and now I won't be able to use much for at least a year. Not to mention, I must be careful with how much I use as I don't want to risk the chance that the Wizarding World picks up on it.

rating - toxic, pc - parasite sue, p - not fanfic and/or crossover, b - sphesul chest size, stu - harry potter, or - money (lots), p - crossover

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