Phen loves Elizabuffy, so she wrote her femslash...

[phendog]

This is written as part of my Kink!Ficlets, especially for elizabuffy. I wrote this one first, actually, but it was long enough, I decided it probably needed a beta. Good thing I did *LOL* Thanks katekat1010. I really have quite a bit to do today, but thought I’d better get this put out because a) elizabuffy would kill me if I didn’t and b) she informs me tomorrow is

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[m_phoenix]

Right, I'm back. I actually had to re-read this, in the interests of providing objective feedback, you understand *g* And yeah, second time around I still want to marry this fic and have its babies...weird image, but still. I'll echo everyone else in saying how well you got inside Buffy's head, this was beautifully in character throughout. I loved your choice to do it as a first person stream of consciousness monologue, I think it definitely added to the immediacy, and the intimacy of it. Don't swear never to do it again, you're good at it. Also, weren't you just saying you wished you could branch out? Well you did, and you can. When's the second person fic coming out? (-: Anyway, the way you slowly built the sexual tension, had just the right balance of denial, and confusion, and teen lust and humour, and maybe under it all something deeper. And the slow build and good characterization (of Faith as well as Buffy) made this really damned hot to read, and I never thought I'd say that about toe-fucking! Having them doing it under the

[phendog]

*slaps forhead* VERY good point on Wesley...this just proves I need to see season 3 again! ARG! He wasn't originally in the fic, and then I added him because I was thinking, ah, Faith came in halfway through season 3 and Wesley did too...*L* you're right, I'm wrong, and OH LOOKIE! His name is getting edited out *Grin* Thanks

[m_phoenix]

And thanks for reading! *LOL* I was hoping you would...most of my flist probably won't be since they're either 1) B/G fans or 2) m/m slashers, so I'm sure I scared them all off ;^) I'm very happy it worked okay...I was a bit nervous. Not w/the femslash so much as with the format.

You wrote B/F, my fic version of catnip, of course I was gonna read it, it was irresistable. ::rolls around purring::

And you'll notice I DID cheat *grin* I generally suck at Faith characterization (hence why I admire yours so much)--or maybe it's not the characterization so much as the mannerisms and speech patterns--and so kinda shoved her in the background.

Aww, thanks, she's tough to write, even for me. But your aproach did work, and she was in character.

And you should be either excited or terrified. I've got an idea for yours, but damn it...it's kinda complicated! *L* So now my question how to make it short. *Sigh*Excited, definitely, excited. I was gonna say I have faith in your abilities, but that phrase really never will be usable again will it *

Okay...bad computer!

[phendog]

*grr* I wrote you a halfway longish response and the darn computer didn't post

Re: Okay...bad computer!

[phendog]

Okay...so it posted both times. I'll just leave them both up out of spite! *EVIL LJ!*