Phen loves Elizabuffy, so she wrote her femslash...
This is written as part of my Kink!Ficlets, especially for elizabuffy. I wrote this one first, actually, but it was long enough, I decided it probably needed a beta. Good thing I did *LOL* Thanks katekat1010. I really have quite a bit to do today, but thought I’d better get this put out because a) elizabuffy would kill me if I didn’t and b) she informs me tomorrow is
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Anyway, sorry to be shorter this time:
THANK YOU for pointing out the Wesley bit...that was a symptom of me not watching Season 3 lately. I was just thinking that both he and faith were there the second half of the season and didn't really think out the logistics. You'll notice I'm deleting his name ;^) because you are very definitely right!
As for pointing out the "So"s, that's appreciated also! I think it's because of the format...it's something I do often myself in IM and the like and so when I was doing 1st person thoughts it kinda transferred over. Still, it's something I should watch. I noticed there were some other words I repeated more often than I should have.
Thank you for reading!;^) I was hoping you would as most of my flist is B/G or m/m slashers so I think I might have scared them off! *LOL* VERY glad to hear you liked it. I was nervous. Not so much because it was femslash, but because of the format.
*L* As for second person, who knows? I LOVE the way you did yours; on the otherhand, I generally dislike those that belong to the ABH genre, so...*L* We'll see!
You'll notice I cheated a bit too. I generally suck at Faith's characterization (which is something I admire about your writing so much!)--or maybe it's not the characterization so much as it's the mannerisms and speech patterns--so I kinda just shoved her off to the side *LOL* Anyway.
Now let's hope it posts this time!
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