Phen loves Elizabuffy, so she wrote her femslash...

Oct 10, 2004 14:18

This is written as part of my Kink!Ficlets, especially for elizabuffy. I wrote this one first, actually, but it was long enough, I decided it probably needed a beta. Good thing I did *LOL* Thanks katekat1010. I really have quite a bit to do today, but thought I’d better get this put out because a) elizabuffy would kill me if I didn’t and b) she informs me tomorrow is ( Read more... )

fic faith, fic buffy/faith, fic buffy, fic

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phendog October 11 2004, 14:23:25 UTC
*slaps forhead* VERY good point on Wesley...this just proves I need to see season 3 again! ARG! He wasn't originally in the fic, and then I added him because I was thinking, ah, Faith came in halfway through season 3 and Wesley did too...*L* you're right, I'm wrong, and OH LOOKIE! His name is getting edited out *Grin* Thanks!

Also a decent point on the SO...unfortunately, it's a word _I_ personally use a lot, so very likely that's just me showing though. In formal 3rd person writing I tend not to let as many (though still quite a few) of my verbalisms slip through, but, ah, in this case I'm sure it's a symptom of letting myself get slack because of the style. Still, I appreciate you bringing my attention to it! I know there were several other words that were repeated a lot in this fic, and, you'll notice it's full of ellipses? My beta cut out about half of them as it is *LOL*

And thanks for reading! *LOL* I was hoping you would...most of my flist probably won't be since they're either 1) B/G fans or 2) m/m slashers, so I'm sure I scared them all off ;^) I'm very happy it worked okay...I was a bit nervous. Not w/the femslash so much as with the format.

And you'll notice I DID cheat *grin* I generally suck at Faith characterization (hence why I admire yours so much)--or maybe it's not the characterization so much as the mannerisms and speech patterns--and so kinda shoved her in the background.

And you should be either excited or terrified. I've got an idea for yours, but damn it...it's kinda complicated! *L* So now my question how to make it short. *Sigh*

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m_phoenix October 12 2004, 00:44:07 UTC
And thanks for reading! *LOL* I was hoping you would...most of my flist probably won't be since they're either 1) B/G fans or 2) m/m slashers, so I'm sure I scared them all off ;^) I'm very happy it worked okay...I was a bit nervous. Not w/the femslash so much as with the format.

You wrote B/F, my fic version of catnip, of course I was gonna read it, it was irresistable. ::rolls around purring::

And you'll notice I DID cheat *grin* I generally suck at Faith characterization (hence why I admire yours so much)--or maybe it's not the characterization so much as the mannerisms and speech patterns--and so kinda shoved her in the background.

Aww, thanks, she's tough to write, even for me. But your aproach did work, and she was in character.

And you should be either excited or terrified. I've got an idea for yours, but damn it...it's kinda complicated! *L* So now my question how to make it short. *Sigh*

Excited, definitely, excited. I was gonna say I have faith in your abilities, but that phrase really never will be usable again will it *g*

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