Hey, I'm still writing that thing that I'm writing, but I'm having trouble getting the boys to shut up. Seriously, they will not. Stop. Talking. Does anyone want to read chatty sex? Because right now it's in danger of reading like this:
Wilson cast an appreciative glance over House's naked body. "Who would win in a fight," he asked, "Batman or Hal
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THIS IS ONE OF THOSE TIMES WHEN WILSON IS WRONG
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SRSLY, IF I REALLY THOUGHT THAT, DON'T YOU THINK YOU WOULD HAVE NOTICED ME FOAMING AT THE MOUTH BY NOW? I WOULD BE BEGGING YOU TO SHOOT ME
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Yvi's pool story had that Aquaman line, which was awesome, and I've decided to try and include a superhero conversation in every fic I write from now on. Unless it REALLY doesn't work, like if it's a Bible AU or something (still though, David and Goliath were basically superheroes, right? Strongman and The Slingshot Boy, or something).
I think I'll carry on down this road. All I can be is myself.
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I agree, I'm just worried that it'll be distracting. I mean, I'm not convinced of my smutty prowess as it is, so adding a load of random dialogue might not be helpful. Then again, going against instinct would probably be even worse, so...
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SO TO SPEAK
DUDE! I HAVE THE SAME TROUBLE! HOUSE-IN-MY-HEAD FROM MY CROSSOVER FIC WILL NOT SHUT UP D:
I HAVE TO EDIT HIM LIEK WOAH
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THEY WERE GETTING DOWN TO IT AND THEN HOUSE WAS ALL LIKE "BLAH BLAH BLAH MARLON BRANDO" AND WILSON WAS LIKE "OLD MARLON BRANDO? EW" AND I WAS LIKE "STFU YOU GUYS"
ASSHOLES
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My ex and I visited there one weekend (it's only a couple hours from Iowa State, where I went to college until last December). We'd seen the rest of the zoo, then went to the Rainforest area, which has monkeys and such. It was after 5, and the zoo closed at 7, but we didn't know that the Rainforest closed at 5. So, we were alone. It was kinda romantic in a Tarzan way. The end.
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Good story.
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But I think dialogue works during sex. Especially if it's two characters like House and Wilson; their conversations in the show are already like foreplay, can't see how that wouldn't carry over into the actual physical deed.
I talk during sex, anyway. Not dirty talk; I've probably had that conversation you wrote above. I date comic book nerds, what?
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I feel emboldened by all the dialogue loving. And totally relieved, because getting rid of it all would have left a huge vacuum in my fic, which was finally starting to actually come together, kind of.
I've probably had that conversation you wrote above.
That makes me unaccountably happy. I was really hoping somebody would have.
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What the hell else were we going to talk about?
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