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Hey, I'm still writing that thing that I'm writing, but I'm having trouble getting the boys to shut up. Seriously, they will not. Stop. Talking. Does anyone want to read chatty sex? Because right now it's in danger of reading like this:
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Yvi's pool story had that Aquaman line, which was awesome, and I've decided to try and include a superhero conversation in every fic I write from now on. Unless it REALLY doesn't work, like if it's a Bible AU or something (still though, David and Goliath were basically superheroes, right? Strongman and The Slingshot Boy, or something).
I think I'll carry on down this road. All I can be is myself.
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I agree, I'm just worried that it'll be distracting. I mean, I'm not convinced of my smutty prowess as it is, so adding a load of random dialogue might not be helpful. Then again, going against instinct would probably be even worse, so...
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No, I totally know what you mean, and I think that's basically going to be my tactic. I'm just hoping it doesn't tip over into sounding like I'm MSTing my own fic...
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