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Hey, I'm still writing that thing that I'm writing, but I'm having trouble getting the boys to shut up. Seriously, they will not. Stop. Talking. Does anyone want to read chatty sex? Because right now it's in danger of reading like this:
Wilson cast an appreciative glance over House's naked body. "Who would win in a fight," he asked, "Batman or Hal Jordan?"
"The Green Lantern would win," replied House, reaching for his lover's straining erection, "but Batman is totally better."
"Are you kidding?" moaned Wilson, the friction causing waves of pleasure to radiate through him. "Batman is so overrated."
Obviously THIS IS NOT WHAT I'M ACTUALLY WRITING, but it's going that way. I'm not sure whether to carry on with it the way that it is, surfeit of dialogue and all, or attempt a complete overhaul. I'm not sure it would be worth it, seeing as I'm finally on what could almost be described as a roll.
I guess I should worry less about whether people will want to read it, given that I write primarily for myself. That's the idea, anyway.