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Virgin Sanji....to help clense my SlutSanji Soul.... anonymous September 17 2008, 14:28:20 UTC
"Damnit, Luffy, you said you had a plan!" PART 1 anonymous September 17 2008, 14:31:00 UTC
(Writer-anon’s note: Hope this is okay. How to seduce a virgin, the Luffy way. I had a hard time trying to keep everyone in character, so I hope it’s not too bad. Luffy/Sanji/Zoro threesome, with lots of sex, and hopefully a not too stupid plot.)It was official. This was the most humiliated Sanji had ever been in his nineteen years of life. The effects of the All Truth beam that shitty devil fruit bastard had hit him with to find out where they’d docked the Going Merry still hadn’t faded, and his so called friends were all having a blast using it against him. His only comfort was that Zoro hadn’t been there when Luffy made him admit that no, he didn’t really hate the shitty marimo, and yes, he was actually quite fond of him. And at least Nami-san hadn’t been there to see his cool façade get ripped to shreds ( ... )

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"Damnit, Luffy, you said you had a plan!" PART 2 anonymous September 17 2008, 14:32:35 UTC
“Come on, Zoro, let’s do it ( ... )

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"Damnit, Luffy, you said you had a plan!" PART 3 anonymous September 17 2008, 14:34:33 UTC
“Wh-what the shit? Why would I want to have sex with you two shitheads?” he managed to get out, then instantly felt like hitting himself for how shaky his voice had sounded. Luffy, who was now in the middle of shrugging out of his vest, gave him a surprised look ( ... )

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"Damnit, Luffy, you said you had a plan!" PART 4 anonymous September 17 2008, 14:36:59 UTC
He blinked tears from his eyes and found himself looking up at Zoro’s leering face, so close that he could feel his breath against his skin ( ... )

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"Damnit, Luffy, you said you had a plan!" PART 5 anonymous September 17 2008, 14:41:29 UTC
He only got a few seconds to calm down, because then Luffy’s hand returned, warm and slick with something as he wrapped it around Sanji’s cock. Sanji couldn’t hold back the moan that welled up in his throat, Luffy‘s stroking hand quickly bringing him close to the edge again. He was only faintly aware of it when Zoro made eye contact with Luffy over his shoulder, then he was shifting beneath him again, his knees pressing against Sanji‘s ribcage. He felt a hand against his tailbone, urging him lower, and Sanji complied mindlessly, his heart racing and his mind reeling with sensation. Then that stroking hand gripped him around the root, urged him forward until the head of his cock made contact with warm skin, and instinct took over.

Sanji pushed, one knee sliding amongst the blankets as he tried to get inside, and suddenly he was. His entire world focused on heat and pressure and, ohshit, inside, and then everything was white behind his eyelids ( ... )

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"Damnit, Luffy, you said you had a plan!" PART 6 anonymous September 17 2008, 14:43:29 UTC
“Well, we can’t turn back time ( ... )

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"Damnit, Luffy, you said you had a plan!" PART 7 anonymous September 17 2008, 14:45:09 UTC
The initial pain melted away quickly, leaving a strange kind of pleasure in its wake, and he couldn’t decide if he liked it or not. He didn’t give it any deeper thought, however, because the way the fluid thrusts were pushing him into Zoro felt fucking fantastic. He lost track of time, wasn’t aware of anything but the new sensations coursing through his body. It felt like forever and not long enough before Luffy’s pace changed, his grip on Sanji’s hips tightening. There was a stutter in his movements, three hard thrusts that made Sanji cry out, and then the flesh inside him twitched as Luffy shouted out his release ( ... )

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Re: "Damnit, Luffy, you said you had a plan!" PART 7 anonymous September 17 2008, 16:53:59 UTC
I don't userally like this trio but that was very well written and hot. Good job!

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Re: "Damnit, Luffy, you said you had a plan!" PART 7 anonymous September 17 2008, 17:09:30 UTC
OP: I am secretly reading this at work so I will comeback later and properly comment but OMG.."I dare you to top me" Zoro is one of the hotest things I've ever seen. And poor truth tellling sanji! That would be fun though!

I only got away with reading half of the story before the boss came in...I PROMISE I will finish it later and comment properly but OMG it is so great already! Thanks anon!!

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Re: "Damnit, Luffy, you said you had a plan!" PART 7 anonymous September 17 2008, 20:04:08 UTC
(not OP): omfg, that was hot!

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Re: "Damnit, Luffy, you said you had a plan!" PART 7 anonymous September 17 2008, 23:03:00 UTC
Holy crap! That was incredible! Hot and in character (you wrote Luffy sex in character! And manly-bottom Zoro! *amazed*) and just awesome! Buckets and buckets of love for you, anon. So well done. <3

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Re: "Damnit, Luffy, you said you had a plan!" PART 7 anonymous September 18 2008, 15:59:58 UTC
So glad you like it! Manly-bottom Zoro is my favourite kind of Zoro.

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Re: "Damnit, Luffy, you said you had a plan!" PART 7 anonymous September 18 2008, 01:47:12 UTC
Daaaaamn that was so hot *wipes drool* They make the sexiest threesome.

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Re: "Damnit, Luffy, you said you had a plan!" PART 7 anonymous September 18 2008, 15:24:41 UTC
OP: OK...back with comments.

OHMYGOD....This is probably one of the best and most convincing (and not to mention super hot) threesomes I've ever read!

I think you captured virgin Sanji perfectly here and Luffy is so IC it hurts!

LOve it! Thanks so much anon!

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Re: "Damnit, Luffy, you said you had a plan!" PART 7 anonymous September 18 2008, 15:58:40 UTC
Eeeeee, so happy! I think I'm blushing!

I was really worried about the characterisation, so I’m glad you think it turned out okay.

Thank YOU for requesting! I had so much fun writing this (gave me an excuse to write threesome and bottom-Zoro).

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