"Damnit, Luffy, you said you had a plan!" PART 7
anonymous
September 17 2008, 14:45:09 UTC
The initial pain melted away quickly, leaving a strange kind of pleasure in its wake, and he couldn’t decide if he liked it or not. He didn’t give it any deeper thought, however, because the way the fluid thrusts were pushing him into Zoro felt fucking fantastic. He lost track of time, wasn’t aware of anything but the new sensations coursing through his body. It felt like forever and not long enough before Luffy’s pace changed, his grip on Sanji’s hips tightening. There was a stutter in his movements, three hard thrusts that made Sanji cry out, and then the flesh inside him twitched as Luffy shouted out his release.
He pulled out almost immediately afterwards, removed himself from Sanji’s back and sat down on the floor with a thud and a short burst of breathless laughter. Sanji barely had time to register a strangely empty feeling and a different kind of sting at Luffy’s withdrawal, his focus quickly snapping back to Zoro and his burning need to fuck him through the floor.
He shifted, settled his knees securely amongst the blankets for better leverage and picked up his own rhythm, hard and fast and desperate. Zoro gasped and moved one of his legs from Sanji’s shoulder, dug his heal into the small of his back instead. One hand snaking between their bodies, he started jerking himself off with harsh movements as Sanji fucked him, his knuckles brushing against Sanji‘s stomach with every stroke. Sanji’s head was swimming, so close to coming that he could almost taste it. He shoved even harder, and an actual shout tore itself from Zoro’s throat, wordless and desperate.
‘I caused that.’
That thought proved to be the final straw. He came so hard he actually hurt, shuddering and pressed as seep as he could go. Zoro kept moving beneath him, and a few seconds later he let out strange, choked sound, his release splashing warm and wet against Sanji’s stomach.
Sanji gasped desperately for breath, sweaty and too damn hot. He rolled to the side once Zoro moved his legs enough for Sanji to get off of him, his dick making a wet sound as it slipped out, and collapsed on the blankets.
“That was hot!” Luffy said enthusiastically as he plopped down on Zoro’s other side.
“Ungh…” Sanji agreed, feeling as if his brain had leaked out through dick with that last orgasm. He opened his eyes as something soft landed on his chest and realised that it was one of his favourite kitchen towels.
“Clean up,” Luffy said, and the damp spot he felt as he picked the towel up proved that Luffy had already ruined it.
“Bastard,” Sanji muttered, ignored Luffy as he wondered what he meant, and wiped his dick and stomach clean. He winced a little as he rubbed the soft fabric between his buttocks, cleaning away the worst of the lube and come and longing for a shower.
He dropped the towel in the mess on Zoro’s belly once he’d finished, making the other man grumble something he couldn‘t make out. The swordsman mopped up the come on his skin without opening his eyes, but fell asleep before he got to the rest of it, so Luffy helped him with that, his seemingly endless supply of energy leaving him wide awake when the only thing Sanji wanted to do was sleep.
“It was good, huh, Sanji? Really good, right?”
Sanji looked up at his captain. The kid was almost bouncing, his face split practically in half by a huge, toothy grin.
“Yeah, it was good,” Sanji agreed. He moved a little, trying to find a comfortable position on the blankets, but winced as his ass reminded him of exactly what it had been through.
“I think I like fucking more than being fucked, though,” he grumbled. “And I still like women, just so you know.”
“Yeah. Me too.”
They looked at each other for a moment, then turned their eyes on Zoro, snoring peacefully between them.
“Maybe we could share him?” Luffy suggested. Sanji thought that was a very good idea.
Re: "Damnit, Luffy, you said you had a plan!" PART 7
anonymous
September 17 2008, 17:09:30 UTC
OP: I am secretly reading this at work so I will comeback later and properly comment but OMG.."I dare you to top me" Zoro is one of the hotest things I've ever seen. And poor truth tellling sanji! That would be fun though!
I only got away with reading half of the story before the boss came in...I PROMISE I will finish it later and comment properly but OMG it is so great already! Thanks anon!!
Re: "Damnit, Luffy, you said you had a plan!" PART 7
anonymous
September 17 2008, 23:03:00 UTC
Holy crap! That was incredible! Hot and in character (you wrote Luffy sex in character! And manly-bottom Zoro! *amazed*) and just awesome! Buckets and buckets of love for you, anon. So well done. <3
He pulled out almost immediately afterwards, removed himself from Sanji’s back and sat down on the floor with a thud and a short burst of breathless laughter. Sanji barely had time to register a strangely empty feeling and a different kind of sting at Luffy’s withdrawal, his focus quickly snapping back to Zoro and his burning need to fuck him through the floor.
He shifted, settled his knees securely amongst the blankets for better leverage and picked up his own rhythm, hard and fast and desperate. Zoro gasped and moved one of his legs from Sanji’s shoulder, dug his heal into the small of his back instead. One hand snaking between their bodies, he started jerking himself off with harsh movements as Sanji fucked him, his knuckles brushing against Sanji‘s stomach with every stroke. Sanji’s head was swimming, so close to coming that he could almost taste it. He shoved even harder, and an actual shout tore itself from Zoro’s throat, wordless and desperate.
‘I caused that.’
That thought proved to be the final straw. He came so hard he actually hurt, shuddering and pressed as seep as he could go. Zoro kept moving beneath him, and a few seconds later he let out strange, choked sound, his release splashing warm and wet against Sanji’s stomach.
Sanji gasped desperately for breath, sweaty and too damn hot. He rolled to the side once Zoro moved his legs enough for Sanji to get off of him, his dick making a wet sound as it slipped out, and collapsed on the blankets.
“That was hot!” Luffy said enthusiastically as he plopped down on Zoro’s other side.
“Ungh…” Sanji agreed, feeling as if his brain had leaked out through dick with that last orgasm. He opened his eyes as something soft landed on his chest and realised that it was one of his favourite kitchen towels.
“Clean up,” Luffy said, and the damp spot he felt as he picked the towel up proved that Luffy had already ruined it.
“Bastard,” Sanji muttered, ignored Luffy as he wondered what he meant, and wiped his dick and stomach clean. He winced a little as he rubbed the soft fabric between his buttocks, cleaning away the worst of the lube and come and longing for a shower.
He dropped the towel in the mess on Zoro’s belly once he’d finished, making the other man grumble something he couldn‘t make out. The swordsman mopped up the come on his skin without opening his eyes, but fell asleep before he got to the rest of it, so Luffy helped him with that, his seemingly endless supply of energy leaving him wide awake when the only thing Sanji wanted to do was sleep.
“It was good, huh, Sanji? Really good, right?”
Sanji looked up at his captain. The kid was almost bouncing, his face split practically in half by a huge, toothy grin.
“Yeah, it was good,” Sanji agreed. He moved a little, trying to find a comfortable position on the blankets, but winced as his ass reminded him of exactly what it had been through.
“I think I like fucking more than being fucked, though,” he grumbled. “And I still like women, just so you know.”
“Yeah. Me too.”
They looked at each other for a moment, then turned their eyes on Zoro, snoring peacefully between them.
“Maybe we could share him?” Luffy suggested. Sanji thought that was a very good idea.
THE END
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I only got away with reading half of the story before the boss came in...I PROMISE I will finish it later and comment properly but OMG it is so great already! Thanks anon!!
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OHMYGOD....This is probably one of the best and most convincing (and not to mention super hot) threesomes I've ever read!
I think you captured virgin Sanji perfectly here and Luffy is so IC it hurts!
LOve it! Thanks so much anon!
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I was really worried about the characterisation, so I’m glad you think it turned out okay.
Thank YOU for requesting! I had so much fun writing this (gave me an excuse to write threesome and bottom-Zoro).
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“Yup, and it worked! Sanji’s here and you’re naked. All that‘s left now is the sex!”
That's the best line ever, thank you very much. XDDDDDDDDDD
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