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Out of Choices - Chapter 21

Feb 15, 2009 00:38

Title: Out Of Choices
Chapter 21: Standstill (Previous Chapters: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15, 16, 17, 18, 19.1, 19.2, 20)
Author:JCAddict/picklewinkle/Sher
Fandom: Twilight
Word Count: 10,715
Rating: R/M, for sex and language
Story Summary: An angry young woman is forced to move to the town of Forks, Washington and decides ( Read more... )

ooc, twilight, fanfiction

Comments 4

dawntwilight000 February 16 2009, 02:14:33 UTC

Sheri ( ... )

susieqtaj143 February 16 2009, 05:41:16 UTC

i have to tell you sheri, that your writing drives me crazy! i almost want to smack bella because she's so damn headstrong and proud! and i love the favorite mistake line! this was a great chapter to your story! i can't wait to see what edward has in store for her!!!!what is he thinking by showing up? i love this story, and the way you write!by the way, thanks for adding me, and i do hope that you had a great v-day!!!

hairsprayx12 February 17 2009, 02:20:37 UTC

*considers placing favorite blanket and fluffy pillow on floor permanently as she's never getting off the ground from all of Sher's wonderful fic*

Ok at the risk of getting giant ass boulders chucked at me I just have to say...never read Stepanie Meyer...and I probably never will...I can't imagine reading her Twilight and being satisfied after reading your.

Commence the chucking

optimistic4ever January 21 2010, 22:04:07 UTC

Awesome chapter Sher! I am so mad at Bella for pushing Edward away so much. She is very headstrong, and it drives me crazy. Poor Edward! I just want to tell him to never give up on her regardless of how hard she continues to push. They need eachother, and he knows it, and I think that she does as well, but her fear is making her decisions for her.

I love the little notes that he left for her. They were beautiful, and I think that they will prove to her that he felt more for her than just the physical. He is tied to her emotionally as well. I think the fact that he showed up on the ski trip is perfect. I am sure that he will break through the walls once again, and by the end of the trip, all will be okay once again.

I can't wait to read more Sher. Your story is amazing, perfect, and made of so much win, that I can't think of a more original way to describe it! Nicely done!