soryHad to do it. I don't have a lotta time before I have to have a portfolio ready if I EVER want to go to uni, and have had a massive push from Tania. But what the hell do I put into this portfolio. I mean, I know basically what stories to put in, but what parts? and what if it's not covering enough of my work? and what if I could do better? what ( Read more... )

This one's an extract from the only story I've ever finished. It's title-less, but never used to be. I'm not telling you what the title used to be, I've had too many people laugh at me for it.

Also, I know it needs some major editing. In fact, I'm pretty sure that some of it makes no sense at all, but if you feel inclined to comment on what may be ( Read more... )

So... to get away from depressing journal entries, I'm posting some of the stuff that I was writing for my portfolio. As far as I can remember, this particular piece has not been edited since last year. Feel free to pick holes in it. Tell me you loved it, hated it, that it was written well or crappy.

Six vampires were holding onto Zoe tightly so ( Read more... )