I give you the funniest, quirkiest and most enjoyable chapter this far. It's not short on plot, either.

Chapter Four: Mind Link

Part One:
( Saif sure loves his puns. )

 Togkyio wasn’t always the mess it is now. Once, it was a beacon-it was a face of a golden age.

And then Man Grew Proud. There have been nothing but useless fan fictions one after the other.

No critic could stand against them! No canon could prevent the desecrations from happening. I failed, again and again to combat the horrible mutations of ( Read more... )