I give you the funniest, quirkiest and most enjoyable chapter this far. It's not short on plot, either.

Chapter Four: Mind Link

Part One:
( Saif sure loves his puns. )

It was awesome; the plot was well-connected (only thing that bothered me was...Woah, I even forgot when nearing the climax ( Read more... )

~Saif

"Cynthia is the champion of the Elite Four, and Prof. Rowan is the highest academic personnel in the Pokémon studies field," Lucian began, as he walked in the room, pulling out a chair and sitting on it. Cynthia followed in, but Rowan instead, headed towards Ielas, who was covered by the bed sheet, only giving an absent gaze over me.

"I've ( Read more... )