I Remove My Pants in Celebration, and Also Because It Is Too Hot in This Room
*points to icon hastily cropped from official 120x90 version*
Oh, yes. There were so many adverbs. So many terrible adverbs. But only 156 occurrences of "very," which I thought I'd abused so much harder, and only about 36 each of "rather" and "quite." I guess there are still some lines that my inner editor will not cross, and one of those lines involves text that is more than 0.5% shameless polystyrene.
I ended up with only 56 little red tally marks for my body count, but I did ice three out of eight major characters and leave another two missing and presumed dead, so there's that. And I liked the part around November 26th when I started getting punchy and tossing things just in for the heck of it (like a gratuitously long epilogue in modern-day Yoyogi Park), as well as that part around the 28th when everyone abruptly started swearing a whole lot more.
Now I'm going to hit that little "Archive" button in Writely, I miss you, baby, you were so green and pretty Google Docs and enjoy not poking this thing for a while.
Oh, yes. There were so many adverbs. So many terrible adverbs. But only 156 occurrences of "very," which I thought I'd abused so much harder, and only about 36 each of "rather" and "quite." I guess there are still some lines that my inner editor will not cross, and one of those lines involves text that is more than 0.5% shameless polystyrene.
I ended up with only 56 little red tally marks for my body count, but I did ice three out of eight major characters and leave another two missing and presumed dead, so there's that. And I liked the part around November 26th when I started getting punchy and tossing things just in for the heck of it (like a gratuitously long epilogue in modern-day Yoyogi Park), as well as that part around the 28th when everyone abruptly started swearing a whole lot more.
Now I'm going to hit that little "Archive" button in Writely, I miss you, baby, you were so green and pretty Google Docs and enjoy not poking this thing for a while.