I had my English professor review it, and want to get opinions from all of  you as well. My main concern is my first paragraph. How can I make it more interesting ( Read more... )

I'm sure this has been asked, but a scan of tagged entries didn't show it ( Read more... )

 
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I am applying to one unversity that asks for three essays instead of the standard one. They want a personal statement, a statement of previous arrests/prison time, etc. (which I said not applicable), and ( Read more... )

Like a lot of other people in this comm, I am in the process of muddling my way towards an acceptable final draft of my statement of purpose ( Read more... )

On the application that I'm working on, there's an essay section with the usual SOP, CV but there's a separate entry place for activities and honors. At all of my other schools, I've just made a short CV type list of activities and honors, but I'm not sure whether or not I should write a short essay for this one ( Read more... )