A Tangled Web part nineteen!

[loveroftheflame]

Ok, here it is! A Tangled Web part nineteen. This part is not only the longest I ever posted but the most difficult to write. Zuko needed a huge shovel to get himself out of the hole he dug in the last part and it took me a while to find it. Special thanks goes out to my beta Smillaraaq for her incredible paitence and utterly perfect suggestions.

Comments

[rumor_of_war]

For some reason, from the point where Zuko started shaking Katara to the end reminded me of an old black and white movie. So, instead of the Asian feel of Avatar in my mind during that scene I saw it in black and white and all 20's style. Weird. XD

Anyway...great, great, great, GREAT! So romantic and I just love the dialogue! It's sweet.

[loveroftheflame]

I'm glad you liked it! That was interesting.. Now I'm trying to imagine it like that! LOL!!