Multi Chapter - Oiran - Chapter 1

[zukkoke_iero]

Title: Oiran - chapter 1

Comments

[indira22]

wonder how matsuoka die????
i'm digging the stroy so much...and new nickname for oh-chan "chie'?? kawaii!!

[zukkoke_iero]

we're building up the story to that extent ^^;
fufufufu, we love that name, yes.
thanks for rnc...

[erussy]

Ohhh wow....I lost my word, can't say anything except NEXT chap pleaseeeeee.

[zukkoke_iero]

ahahaha.. thank you ^^
will work hard for the next chapter XD

[xyabux]

I just love this!! This chapter is really good. :) I like your writing style too. :)

Just one question, how old Ohno was in this part? :o that start "The little servant, Satoshi, walks behind his Onee-sama heading toward the teahouse, where the guests are waiting for them." part?

Sorry about this stupid question n.n''

I can't wait next part. :]

[zukkoke_iero]

wow, thanks for the compliment...

lol, no no, it's not stupid at all...
maybe i should have add a side note for his age, huh
at that part, he's 10 ^^

thank you again, pls look forward to next chap as well =D

[xyabux]

Okey ^^ Thanks I was confused little bit when I read it but now when I know he's age.. :'D I understand it better n.n

Yes I will ^o^

[zukkoke_iero]

ahhahaha... yes, go ahead..^^

[batrisya_85]

OMG~ soo good! i loike this mukodono, opps.. matsuoka-dono..he's soo gentle.. and yes, it was HOT in here~ RAWR!! hehe~

duduk manis menunggu update! ganbatte ne zukko! <3

[zukkoke_iero]

ahhhhhh... he is!! he is!! *nods nods*
I love his gentleness...
well, i love his character the most here XDD

yay! we're writing it as I replying to these comments ^^
makasih trisya~